derpy's ghost manor

derpy's ghost manor

a fanmade short about derpy's new house the golden leaf manor what happens next? you'll only out when you it!

published on July 19, 20136 reads 6 readers 2 not completed
golden leaf manor

golden leaf manor

Derpy was excited. "Moving into a manor! One of everypony's dreams! How rainbow dash will be so jealous!" thought Derpy. She stepped inside and their were paintings on the wall, the kind to give you nightmares. it was already late so Derpy went to find the bedroom. She looked everywhere but the bedroom was nowhere to be seen. And then it hit her. she had to find a sercret tunnel or something. She rammed into a wall and it opened like a door. Could it lead to the bedroom? Derpy wanted to find out! she flew down the tunnel and found.......... a dead end. But then something shot up the tunnel, a ghost like creature. It then said "Derpy Derpy" in a light but creepy voice. Derpy was no longer excited she was afraid.
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Rainbow_Bird
Yeah!
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on August 11, 2013
klovecutie03
more plz make a second part!!!
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on July 19, 2013