Harry's..um...SISTER?!?

Harry's..um...SISTER?!?

Harry potter has no idea he has a sibling until vanessa strauss shows up and ruins the picture. What happens? read my story!

published on December 01, 2012406 reads 68 readers 74 not completed
Chapter 1.
Vanessa: Harry's sister

Vanessa: Harry's sister

As Vanessa Straus smoothed her hair, she looked around. Platform 9 and 3 fourths was bustling with activity. As an exchange student from Beauxbatons, she knew nothing except for how to get in. ‘OK, this is new.’ She thought as she received many stares from her future classmates. “Best thing to do is to get on the train.” A boy said. Vanessa looked at him carefully and found she was looking at a tall, lanky boy with ginger hair. “Who are you?” she inquired.
“Why, I’m Marylin Monroe!” he said jokingly. “Naw, name’s Fred Weasley, sixth year, you are too, right?”
“Um, yeah.” Vanessa seemed unsure to trust him or not.
“Hey Fred!!!” another Fred appeared out of nowhere.
Vanessa screamed, “WHO IS THAT?!”
“Calm down! This is my twin, George Weasley!”
After receiving a few more stares from some very rude people, she glared at George – or was it Fred?
“Next time, tell me when your twin will pop up out of nowhere!” Vanessa seemed irritated, but there was a glint in her eye – of laughter.
“I’M GEORGE!”
“Ugh, fine, Fred, tell me when he appears again.”
“Just kidding, I’m Fred.”
Just as Vanessa was going to say something not so nice back, a boy appeared.  “Hey, Fred & George! Have you seen this exchange student from Beauxbatons? She’s a six year.” The speaker was a tall boy, with green eyes and unruly black hair.
“I’m right here. My name’s Vanessa.”
As he studied her, Vanessa thought, ‘ I think I’m looking at my brother!’
“I’m Harry Potter.”
“Hi.” Vanessa said casually. To tell the truth, she wasn’t surprised. After all, she was his – never mind. If Harry didn’t know, she wasn’t gonna tell him.
“You have to come with me. I’m your guide.” Harry told her.
Two other people appeared. One was a girl with brown bushy hair, the other was a boy with the same ginger hair as Fred/George.
“How’s our little Ronnykinks? Muhaw!” Fred and George said this simultaneously.
“Shuddup! I’m Ron, for Merlin’s beard’s sake!” the boy with ginger hair said.  He let out a low whistle. “Is the girl who you have to guide?? Man, she’s a good looker.”
Vanessa turned bright red as the other girl glared at him.
“Sorry about that. I’m Hermione Granger.” The bushy-haired girl said politely.
“It’s OK.” Vanessa mumbled.
“Come with me. The rest of you, get on the train. Except for Hermione. McGonagall wants to talk to you too.” Harry took charge.
“OK.” Hermione said.
They walked in silence after Fred said he’d save Vanessa a seat (or as he called her, Essa). When they made it to the teacher’s compartment, Hermione knocked. “Come in.” said a clear, strong voice. The threesome walked in, unsure about what to expect. “Hermione, can you please wait outside while I speak to Vanessa and Harry?”
“Of course.” Hermione said, glancing sideways at Harry.
“Good morning, you two. Sit down and have a biscuit.”
Vanessa took one, and so did Harry.
“As Vanessa surely knows, you and Harry are siblings.”
Note from Vanessa: I knew it was coming.
“We’re what?” Harry said.
“Siblings.”
“But my last name is Potter. Hers is Strauss.”
“I’ll explain,” Vanessa cut in. “You were there when Mom and Dad died. Blah, Blah, Blah, you survived. I was playing at my friends house, then I came home and you don’t know how much shock I was in, with half the home blown apart and your scar and mom and dad there on the floor. The only thing I thought to do was to contact Professor Dumbledore, a great friend of our parents. So I held you in my arms the whole time, waiting. He came in and hugged me and said ‘We will have to separate you from your brother.’ I lost it after that. Completely. I screamed and shouted and kicked and wouldn’t let you go. Then he took you and said, ‘Harry will be going to Hogwarts. It’s for the best. You will be going to Beauxbatons.’ So I went, made friends, but everyday I’d wake up early to go see the board to find out when the student exchange program would come up. It did, at the end of the year. You could sign up for Hogwarts, Durmstrang, or Starcakes. I picked Hogwarts, but only to find you. I hate travel. So then I met Fred and George and Ron and Hermione and you. The rest is history. Oh yeah, my name is Vanessa Lily James Potter. Strauss is just a cover. Oh yeah, I was 5 when it happened.”
“I don’t believe this!” Harry exclaimed. “You, with your red hair, green eyes, purple glasses, skinny jeans, black Hello Kitty shirt, skull necklace and converse are SUPPOSED TO BE MY SISTER?!?”
“That will be enough, Mr. Potter. And we do have a uniform here, Ms. Strauss.”
“Sorry,” Vanessa muttered.
“You are dismissed.”
They walked out silently and made room for Hermione to go in. After 5 minutes she came out a said, “Let’s go find Fred and George and Ron.”
“Sure.” Vanessa said.
They found the threesome in compartment A3. Vanessa lay down in one full bench, Harry and George occupied another, leaving Fred, Ron, and Hermione taking the last bench. Vanessa and Harry explained what happened in the teacher’s compartment.
“So, in conclusion, she’s my big sister, and I’m her little brother.” Harry told the audience.
“Hey,” came a voice. “It’s me, Ginny.”
“Hi Ginny!” everyone chorused except for Vanessa.
“Hey, guys!” came a sweet voice, and in walked Cho Chang.
“Hiyo, I’m Vanessa, Harry’s big sis.”
“Harry has a sister??” Ginny and Cho said simultaneously.
Vanessa and Harry quickly repeated everything to Ginny and Cho.
“Hey, Essa. Do you have a pet?” Fred asked.
“Yeah, let me take it out, it’s a bird….”
Vanessa brought out a brightly colored parrot.
“Her name is Neonee.” Vanessa introduced.
“How the hell did Dumbledore let you bring that- thing on the train?!” Ron exclaimed.
“My mom gave it to me.”
“Ohhhhhh! That explains a lot.”
The kids started talking randomly, until the school approached. All of them quickly changed into their robes and rushed out the door. Ginny told the group, “Neville’s coming with me to grab a compartment. I’ll see you guys later.”
“Ok, bye.” Vanessa replied.
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Tributefrom12
I LOVE IT!
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on June 18, 2014
GlowingAndFading
@cgkittymew got a problem with the parrot?
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on September 05, 2013
cgkittymew
pretty good, but seriously a parrot?
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on September 04, 2013
GlowingAndFading
@JKRowling, the problem was indentified before.
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on August 30, 2013
JKRowling
It's good but Professor Umbridge is the teacher when Harry is in the fifth year which means that Fred and George are in their seventh year. Sorry and I know its confusing but once you have it figured out you get it. Really good story
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on August 29, 2013
puglover3000
You're not gonna finish it? NO!!!
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on August 19, 2013
puglover3000
I've only read 2 chapters so far, but it's really good!
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on August 19, 2013
hermione242
ah thanks you mentioned me
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on July 31, 2013
GlowingAndFading
@JayFeatherLover thank you!!!
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on July 23, 2013
vintagebird
I love this story! This is not hate, but just saying, they say happy Christmas, not merry Christmas, just informing you, cuz you wrote merry Christmas. But people are so mean to be hating on you for such a great fanfic. They're like "this would never happen!" or "this is not logical", well don't listen to them. IT'S A FANFIC! Since when do fan fictions seem like See More▼
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on July 23, 2013
vintagebird
I love this part, cu he IS crying when they save the universe!
"I mean, Harry’s the boy who lived, Ron the bravest person ever, and Hermione’s super smart! And look at you! A stupid, immature, dumb old IDIOT who thinks it’s funny to pick on kids who’ll save the FREAKING UNIVERSE WHILE YOU’LL BE CRYING LIKE A BRAINLESS PIECE OF THESTRAL DUNG!!!!!!!!!!"
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on July 23, 2013
GlowingAndFading
BlackOrchird201, I never want to listen to you again. You are a DISGRACE, I repeat a DISGRACE to every Potterhead. Vanessa is OLDER than Harry, so Lily didn't die with her! And I have my dad's name as my middle name. Dumbledore split them up so Voldemort would never know about the power that the two of them had combined; the reason I never explained that is See More▼
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on July 14, 2013
killedbythesketchbook
THIS IS AN ABOMINATION OF EVERYTHING THAT J.K.ROWLING EVER WROTE WHEN LILY POTTER DIED SHE WAS PREGNANT BUT THAT BABY DIED WITH HER SO HARRY WAS AN ONLY CHILD SO THIS STORY IS NOT POSSIBLE AND BESIDES YOU DIDN'T EXPLAIN THE REASON WHY DUMBLEDORE SPLIT HARRY AND VENESSA UP AND ALSO WHY DID YOU GIVE VANESSA "JAMES" AS A MIDDLE NAME THA\T'S A BOY'S NAME SO THERE See More▼
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on July 13, 2013
GlowingAndFading
Thanks chokolatlover! and np blank
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on July 08, 2013
ChokolatLover
Nice story, me like it!
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on July 08, 2013
blank
Thank you, Infinite for acknowledging me! That so nice!
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on July 06, 2013
GlowingAndFading
Thank you trassie for encouraging me! you were the first! aling with ur siss!
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on July 02, 2013
traslia
btw yaya FRENZY also says THANK UUUUUUUU but she has to do some hw rite now! hehe oh yea and btw me and frenzy r sis so yea!
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on June 28, 2013
traslia
AWWW TY INFINITE!!!! thank YOU for doing an AWESOME addictive story!!!!
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on June 28, 2013
GlowingAndFading
UPDATE!
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on June 20, 2013
blank
LOVE IT AND PLEASE CONTINUE! You are awesome!
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on March 23, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
AWESOME!!!! o-(^.^)-o
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on March 22, 2013
traslia
Since when were u unwanted we lvvvvvvvv uuuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!! ^.^
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on March 01, 2013
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
Yay!! group hug!!! o-(^.^)-o
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on February 28, 2013
GlowingAndFading
Yay!!!! My friends like my best internet friends!! group hug!!!! o-(^.^)-o
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on February 28, 2013
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
Awww!! Don't think that!!! We all want you
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on February 27, 2013
GlowingAndFading
You are AWESOME TOO!!!!!!!!!!! i thought i was unwanted!
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on February 27, 2013
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
Yeah, hermioneSJM!!! We need you!!!
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on February 27, 2013
GlowingAndFading
:O wow u r AWESOME trassie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ))))
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on February 27, 2013
traslia
Not just me! All of us need u! ^.^
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on February 26, 2013