the believer chapter 2

the believer chapter 2

i would have edited the story but i didnt feel like it enjoy rate comment and follow me will always be appreciated that way i will know that you guys want me to continue thank you enjoy

published on November 28, 201219 reads 14 readers 4 completed
chapter two everything has a price

chapter two everything has a price

i was at the funeral the day after my familys death all i could hear  was hearing crying and the priest giving his speach we placed rosses at their coffins as soon as i went to bed hoping this was all a dream but the next day i woke up no one was in my house i had to take care of myself i went to school everybody was looking at me whispering. i a girl came up to and said im sorry for your loss that was the first time no one critisized me i was suprized but i knew that in a cuple of weeks they will all bully me again because they are all hipocrits that day i stayed after school trying to find out what that symbol ment "u" and "m" i couldnt stop thinking about it then i went to the park to get a load off i was watching children play and i was on the bench sitting then i saw a man in a pitch black outfit i couldnt see his face he was staring right at me i wanted to walk up to him or her and ask him wy he was staring at me but i couldnt move for some reason the a car tdrove by that figure and it vanished i was confused the girl from the school came to me and asked if i wanted to talk i stood there nervously and i finaly said yes we sat at a restaurant table a chatted for about an hour or so i couldnt stop looking into her eyes they were so pretty then she said she had to go and so i said "yeah me to"  yeah im not good with words. when i went home i saw a note it said ....look...behind... so i did i saw a man whith a black hoodie knocked me out thenmi woke up tied up in a chair in my house and there were men and women in black hoddies i asked the  what the hell is going on they wouldnt answer then a man in a white hoodie came to me and said do you know wy you are here? i said no. then he said we are here to help you i stood there blankly confused and creeped out.
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TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
It's a cool story!
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on November 30, 2012
nj3000
thanks i hope you share it with all of your friends
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on November 29, 2012
yurikoneko
i like it
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on November 28, 2012
nj3000
im sorry the chapter title is not relevant to the story i couldnt think of anything else T_T
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on November 28, 2012