the murder on 16th street!

the murder on 16th street!

14 year old diane soyer thinks that key west is the most boring place ever! so do the other kids that live on 16 street but when a suspicious man comes into town and mrs and mr haze are murdered everything changes and its up to diane and a few of her friends to find out who murdered mrs and mr haze

published on April 27, 201346 reads 24 readers 12 not completed
Chapter 1.

the day i found out we where moving

diane's pov
it was a regular monday at school and i was talking to my best friend julia about how i over heard my parents talking about maybe moving! i dont know where i ran to my room before  i could hear where! I told her b-b-but what about us! we are best f-f-friends! you guys cant just move!by this time julia was crying her eyes out! i cant face jesica alone! you know she is super mean  and hates my  guts!) julia said. first of all she hates my guts too and second i might not even be moving! i said. i hope not! diane! julia said

julia's pov.

i just cant  believe she might be moving! i hope if she does move that it will be close to ohio!

                                                                   later that day...... BUT MOMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!! WE CANT MOVE! I LOVE IT HERE AND I CANT LEAVE JULIA!!!!! I screamed! sweetie your father got a really good job in key west its for the best you will make new friends mrs soyer said(mrs soyer is dianes mom btw)  KEY WEST! WE ARE MOVING TO KEY WEST!AND NO! I WONT MAKE NEW FRIENDS! EVER! I HATE YOU! swee-NO MOM! I DONT WANT TO HEAR IT YOU PROMISED THIS WAS THE LAST TIME WE MOVE!!!!!!!!!!!! diane stop yelling and listen! mr.soyer said we are just going for a little while we will be back before you know it i swear  YA YA YA I HEARD IT ALL BEFORE! young lady! you do NOT speak to your parents that way go to your room!   FINE!~                                                                                     
                                                      hope you like the first part!
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madison1
Yes yes I do and thanks
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on February 03, 2014
ActingPower13
YAY love it more please!!!
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on November 13, 2013
ActingPower13
ooh i LOVE it it's great!!!!
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on November 13, 2013
madison1
thanks
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on June 03, 2013
funnydancer
good job
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on June 03, 2013
madison1
thanks
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on May 02, 2013
dannyphantom101
OMG GREAT BOOK
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on May 02, 2013
madison1
thanks! im working on that
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on April 28, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
Its great but you need to check your punctuation, capitals, and quotation marks. Otherwise, this story is awesome!!!
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on April 28, 2013
madison1
ok thanks
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on April 27, 2013
Gisselle
continue
when someone is talking use "this" to know what they are saying
i love it
#lovin it
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on April 27, 2013
madison1
hope you like it!
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on April 27, 2013