I wish...

I wish...

This is a song I wrote about a person that has lost her love and everything she had in life and now the only ambition that is left for her is to die.

published on April 17, 201319 reads 15 readers 10 completed
I wish....

I wish....

I left my dreams
In that blackhole
and I never looked back
cuz I left my hopes
I left you love of my heart
I left you the sweet song of my mind
I will never look back
Cuz it hurts inside
lI just want to be
In the room of my mind
without thinking of you
Cuz you've broke my heart
the song tries to come alive
come alive in my mind
but the doors are closed
for him and every one
cuz you made me leave
all the things that I loved
I will never come back
I will never look back
baby its the end
I wish I could change it
Baby its the end
I wish you could believe
I wish you could see it
I wish you could feel
My hearts burning so bad
And I'm getting so mad
Wish I could control
My self but I can't
all I can say is
I wish my only dream
That is left for me
I wish the end would come
for me too baby
that I could close my eyes
Without dreams in peace
I left my dreams
In that black hole
And I never looked back
Cuz I left my hopes
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yalda
Amazing
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on May 18, 2013
ImJustin
Now I know what musicfan meant
amazing song
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on May 12, 2013
secretgirl
Thanks hellraiserprincess and your works are amazing
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on April 19, 2013
HellRaiserPrincess
Hey secretgirl sorry for taking so long to read, comment and rate your work, but this right here, this was beautiful and fantastic. It's so open you know and beyond all that, it's just beautiful. =) Good job.

-Steph
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on April 19, 2013
secretgirl
Thanks for your comments
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on April 18, 2013
music.lover99
Its awesome
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on April 18, 2013
Beauty784
Awesome! I love it!
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on April 18, 2013
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
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on April 18, 2013
musicfan
I love it
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on April 18, 2013
secretgirl
I know Its not that good but hope you like it
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on April 17, 2013