Thank You

Thank You

A poem I wrote two days ago while studying for my Economic Test. I was thinking of my ex, and I came up with this.

published on April 11, 201321 reads 15 readers 5 completed
Thank You

Thank You

You put me through Hell and back,
and I thank you for that.
You pushed me over the edge,
and now I'm hanging on the ledge.
I'm debating on whether I should let it all go,
Or should I get revenge, run and go.
Revenge is a dish best served cold,
Ha! That quote is so old.
You should now see me,
I'm becoming the monster that I never thought I'd be.
You lied to me, you hurt me
Was this really meant to be?
Was it suppose to end like this,
Me, broken hearted and a mess.
A big thanks goes to you for breaking my heart,
because now, my world is falling apart.
And I thank you, for everything you done.


(Author's Note: This ain't my best work, but I thought I would post it up here anyway to see what others would think. Critism is allowed because I know this ain't my best work. But it shows how I'm feeling when I think of my ex and what he done. But I'm moving on and facing life as it is. I know he's one person I will NEVER forget in this world, no matter how hard I try. No matter how hard I say I hate him, I still love him. He has that special place in my heart. He made a huge impact on my life and showed me a different side of the world. I hope I meet someone like him one day. Maybe, just maybe. And another thing, I hope he realizes what and who he lost while he was with that other girl.)
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tuhina
WHO THE HECK BROKE YOUR HEART?
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on March 28, 2014
LexiCha
Jeff: .........Who broke your heart? *shocked look* Who...? .....WHO?
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on May 13, 2013
LexiCha
AMAZING!! You know, when I make poems and try to find my story I think of you. You encourage me to continue writing and try harder. You even remind me of the story that was ripped from it's book. Once I find it I HAVE to post it!!! It also reminds me of Icecat....
That guy really lost an amazing person.
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on April 15, 2013
That.1.Otaku.Named.Maya
This is an amazing poem! You are and amazing and talented writer! Awesome x100000000 job! ((((:
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on April 13, 2013
Idiot_Killjoy
I think he will relize wut he lost soon!!! Steph, wen I read that this wasn't ur best work my jaw dropped to my feet!!! Stephanie, I cant express how amazing u r and how much I look up to u!!!!
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on April 12, 2013