why

why

this is a poem, i hope u like it. i did my best, and my friends who have read it like it, too. i think some of you can relate. this is about jealousy twords your siblings, and how much you want your parents to like you best. just so u know, sometimes its hard to c, but i think every parent loves there child, but some of them just have odd ways of showing it.

published on November 13, 201227 reads 22 readers 11 completed

why

why cant u see that i want you to notice me?
why cant u see i need your love the most?
why cant u see, its tearing me up inside?
why cant u see?
im lost.
confused.
i need your giudance, and trust.
i want you to love me!
i dont want to just be brushed off
and left to gather dust.
i need solice.
i can find it in you,
if youll open the doors to your heart and let me in.
wrap around me a blanket of love, and shield me from the cold.
why cant u see that i need you?
everythings changing now.
the world is becoming brighter. now i can see.
it wasnt you, it was me.
you have always loved me
youve always cared.
why couldnt I see?
now i do. i love you.
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Comments (11)

bunnyboo13
outstanding!!!!!! ur a rly good writter!
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on October 11, 2013
wolfness
Nice.
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on April 06, 2013
Nobody.07
well that was cool!!
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on November 27, 2012
KJestine
that so neet kudos to you
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on November 21, 2012
echomist
yes this is frm expirience.
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on November 15, 2012
xKearax
that's really nice, is this poem from experience?
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on November 14, 2012
twilightfan
Nice
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on November 14, 2012
echomist
thanx!!! i havnt found, u emoteddybear... ill search 4 u now!
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on November 13, 2012
XxChristoferDrewsWifexX
oh its so... lovely xD
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on November 13, 2012
SONAMY12345
or poem lol
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on November 13, 2012
SONAMY12345
Epic Story :D
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on November 13, 2012