Trust is to Kite as...

Trust is to Kite as...

Just a poem I just came up with- I was out flying kites with my little brother. (And the picture is my brother's kite! I had the black angry bird ;)

published on March 31, 20138 reads 8 readers 5 completed
Trust is to Kites as...

Trust is to Kites as...

~~~
They say that the reason that
they don't let me do some things
is that I have proven distrustful.
~~~
I run hard down the hill
hoping that the kite
catches the wind and soars
~~~
They say that they take baby
steps so that I can gain
their trust in me
~~~
The kite catches wind and
soars, keeping with in a few
feet, just within my reach
~~~
They say that when I mess
up, they have to restart
the process over, taking longer
~~~
The kite dips and does
twirls. I gasp as it takes
a sudden dive to the tree
~~~
They say that it'll take
longer to gain the trust back
each time I screw up.
~~~
The kite crashes down to
the ground. I fear it will hit
another object so I keep it near.
~~~
They say that I may never
get that trust back, that
I may never be as privileged.
~~~
The kite doesn't catch wind until I
loosen up the string and gently guide it
and it soars higher than ever.
~~~
They say- well who cares what they
say. I think that they just need
gentle guidance and a longer leash.
~~~
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Nobody.07
Thanks guys!! Putting it my 'collection of poems that i've created' story, 3rd chapter, so ;) Thanks!!
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on April 28, 2013
wolfness
Awesome. Amazing. Brilliant. It's just beautiful, I love it!
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on April 01, 2013
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
Totally awesome!!!:D
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on March 31, 2013
Nobody.07
Whoa. That was fast. Thanks Beauty!!
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on March 31, 2013
Beauty784
I love this poem!
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on March 31, 2013