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How can I improve the following rap lyrics?
So there is this song thing in history that you have to choose a song and play it or sing it to the class. I was thinking that I want to rap my own. So I made a little rap. Please give me advice on how I should improve this. Lyrics down here: "You tell me I'm wrong, you tell me I'm different Don't judge my song, there's nothing to it Because I'm tryn to be myself, ain't tryn to be somebody else If u ain't gonna listen, if u think I'm not worth it I won't loose hope, this song has its purpose I'm just a shy girl, making my way So if u wanna listen, I suggest you stay Because I can school you, anytime and anyday"
shygirl23(None of your business )published on January 13, 2017