How can I improve the following rap lyrics?

How can I improve the following rap lyrics?

So there is this song thing in history that you have to choose a song and play it or sing it to the class. I was thinking that I want to rap my own. So I made a little rap. Please give me advice on how I should improve this. Lyrics down here:
"You tell me I'm wrong, you tell me I'm different
Don't judge my song, there's nothing to it
Because I'm tryn to be myself, ain't tryn to be somebody else
If u ain't gonna listen, if u think I'm not worth it
I won't loose hope, this song has its purpose
I'm just a shy girl, making my way
So if u wanna listen, I suggest you stay
Because I can school you, anytime and anyday"

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three345678ten
I think its great the way it is.
shygirl23
Thanks, but I still need some lyrics. Can't make a song without the lyrics. Thanks tho.
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on January 22, 2017
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on January 22, 2017
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