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TheGmGoken added a new chapter to Project DnP
Boxing Challenge!
Same cover as last weeks folks!
Damai and Tyson are locked in a headbutt. As they look into each other eyes Tyson begins to smile. "Lose this and who knows what R.H.G going to do to you" Tyson evilly but excitingly say. Damai backs his head away. Damai goes for a punch in the ribs charging in with his mouth wide open. "That's not something to fight for" Damai as he goes into the punch. Tyson moves his body away from the punch. "Gotta take this hit. No way I'm dodging this one" Damai as he br... Read Full Chapter
Damai and Tyson are locked in a headbutt. As they look into each other eyes Tyson begins to smile. "Lose this and who knows what R.H.G going to do to you" Tyson evilly but excitingly say. Damai backs his head away. Damai goes for a punch in the ribs charging in with his mouth wide open. "That's not something to fight for" Damai as he goes into the punch. Tyson moves his body away from the punch. "Gotta take this hit. No way I'm dodging this one" Damai as he br... Read Full Chapter
on July 20, 2014
TheGmGoken added a new chapter to Project DnP
Damai's Test! The King of Boxing!
Cover page is just a regular google image for boxing!
Damai is watching T.V. and flicks the channel to the news. With the bottom of the screen saying "Update on Burning Flames High!". Damai mouths open. "Huh? An update?" Damai thinks to himself. The news lady reports. "We're here at the sight of what's left of Burning Flames. Where what we can call a death-planned attack. This seems to be related to the outcast Pudd who was seen fighting the two big huge guys. It seems he manage to draw the... Read Full Chapter
Damai is watching T.V. and flicks the channel to the news. With the bottom of the screen saying "Update on Burning Flames High!". Damai mouths open. "Huh? An update?" Damai thinks to himself. The news lady reports. "We're here at the sight of what's left of Burning Flames. Where what we can call a death-planned attack. This seems to be related to the outcast Pudd who was seen fighting the two big huge guys. It seems he manage to draw the... Read Full Chapter
on July 19, 2014
TheGmGoken added a new chapter to Project DnP
Please Come With Me!
Cover page is speed to show the girl running towards Damai.
The girl is running full sprint towards Damai and Coach. Damai puts his hand on his head to see who is it. "It's a little girl. What she doing in a prison camp?" Damai curiously ask. "FUTUFUTTUFUTFUTU" the girl keeps running. The girl stops running and bends over out of breath. Coach T with a confused look and a sweat stain on his forehead. "What a strange day this is" Coach remarks. Damai walks over to the small girl and lends her ... Read Full Chapter
The girl is running full sprint towards Damai and Coach. Damai puts his hand on his head to see who is it. "It's a little girl. What she doing in a prison camp?" Damai curiously ask. "FUTUFUTTUFUTFUTU" the girl keeps running. The girl stops running and bends over out of breath. Coach T with a confused look and a sweat stain on his forehead. "What a strange day this is" Coach remarks. Damai walks over to the small girl and lends her ... Read Full Chapter
on July 18, 2014
TheGmGoken added a new chapter to Project DnP
The Training Begins!
Cover page is Jail Boxing. You know what that means! He's baaaaack!
Coach Tan is in his car driving. "Aye this is fave song. Making my way downtown Walking fast Faces pass And I'm home bound Staring blankly ahead Just making my way Making a way Through the crowd!" he sings. The cars pulls into a parking lot. He gets out the car and looks at the building. "The Big Prison". Coach Tan gets a comical sweat on his forehead. "President Russev should really change these names. Oh well. It's March a... Read Full Chapter
Coach Tan is in his car driving. "Aye this is fave song. Making my way downtown Walking fast Faces pass And I'm home bound Staring blankly ahead Just making my way Making a way Through the crowd!" he sings. The cars pulls into a parking lot. He gets out the car and looks at the building. "The Big Prison". Coach Tan gets a comical sweat on his forehead. "President Russev should really change these names. Oh well. It's March a... Read Full Chapter
on July 17, 2014
TheGmGoken added a new chapter to Project DnP
Life in the Outskirts.
Cover Page is a girl(Not Cynthia or Neiya) in the hospital. She's a survivor of the incident.
Pudd walks to the outskirts entrance with his new clothes ragged. "Stupid people. Attack me for baseless reasons." Pudd thinks. Before entering the Outskirt zone he looks back. "Neiya probably going to train to kill me. I should get back into shape. Haven't sharpen my skills up since Damai got arrested." Pudd tells himself. The gate opens and as Pudd walk into the Outskirt Zone the other 5 isolated ... Read Full Chapter
Pudd walks to the outskirts entrance with his new clothes ragged. "Stupid people. Attack me for baseless reasons." Pudd thinks. Before entering the Outskirt zone he looks back. "Neiya probably going to train to kill me. I should get back into shape. Haven't sharpen my skills up since Damai got arrested." Pudd tells himself. The gate opens and as Pudd walk into the Outskirt Zone the other 5 isolated ... Read Full Chapter
on July 16, 2014
TheGmGoken added a new chapter to Project DnP
Retreat From Battle! Pudd's new personality
Cover page is the different forms that Birusu's robotic arms can make. Not let's go to the chapter!
Birusu is laughing. "I don't care what fighting position you take! My technology will beat it. From guns to grenade launchers to knives to even arrows." Birusu tells Pudd confidently. Birusu gains a sadistic smile on her face once again. "You stand no chance. Not a chance in hell." Birusu thinks to himself. Pudd with his hand still raised and Cynthia still in his weaken hand looks at Cynthia.... Read Full Chapter
Birusu is laughing. "I don't care what fighting position you take! My technology will beat it. From guns to grenade launchers to knives to even arrows." Birusu tells Pudd confidently. Birusu gains a sadistic smile on her face once again. "You stand no chance. Not a chance in hell." Birusu thinks to himself. Pudd with his hand still raised and Cynthia still in his weaken hand looks at Cynthia.... Read Full Chapter
on July 16, 2014
TheGmGoken added a new chapter to Project DnP
It's Time to Get Serious! Pudd vs Kyojin
Cover Page is the same as last chapter folks! Aaanndd...let's get started!
Birusu smiles maliciously. "Looks out of hiding." Birusu as he talks to Pudd. Kyojin cracks his knuckles and spit on the ground. "I sure in hell hope you put up a better fight than that girl over there. She wasn't even worth the 27,000 Dollars." Kyojin complains. Pudd looks over to Neiya with an angry look. "I personally don't care how much she's worth. She probably isn't much of a fighter anyways" Pudd thinks to him... Read Full Chapter
Birusu smiles maliciously. "Looks out of hiding." Birusu as he talks to Pudd. Kyojin cracks his knuckles and spit on the ground. "I sure in hell hope you put up a better fight than that girl over there. She wasn't even worth the 27,000 Dollars." Kyojin complains. Pudd looks over to Neiya with an angry look. "I personally don't care how much she's worth. She probably isn't much of a fighter anyways" Pudd thinks to him... Read Full Chapter
on July 13, 2014
TheGmGoken added a new chapter to Project DnP
The Bounty Hunter Arc Starts Now!
The cover page is a bad quality(Due to MB limits) picture of all the districts in a "World Map". Now let this new arc unfold. Think I can top the "Introductory Arc"? Let's wait and see. Excited for this one folks. Btw if you want a better quality picture of the "World Map" here's the link. http://i59.tinypic.com/200xxcg.png
Cynthia is taken away but a monster. "Help!" she screams punching the monster in the back rapidly. The monsters throws her on the ground and gets on top of Cynthia. "I l... Read Full Chapter
Cynthia is taken away but a monster. "Help!" she screams punching the monster in the back rapidly. The monsters throws her on the ground and gets on top of Cynthia. "I l... Read Full Chapter
on July 08, 2014
TheGmGoken created a story
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The prototype version of Project P(Formally known as Legacy of DnP). Think of it as a One-Shot. It's only one chapter. Leaves on a cliffhanger.
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by TheGmGoken
on July 07, 2014
8/10 on the quiz. Btw you're going to love my latest chapter.
Elleyd
Awesome!
on July 06, 2014
on July 05, 2014
Hey my first follwer! Remember how we met. I think your going to love my latest chapter xD.
on July 05, 2014
TheGmGoken added a new chapter to Project DnP
Four Months Since That Day!
It's great to be back guys. It has been two or three days. But here here. I'm back. Now it might have been two to three days since I last posted a chapter, but it's been 4 months since that day. Now in the shortest way possible let's review what happen. Damai and Pudd are from the original District 1 where instead of being called their actual names, they're called Project D and Project P by higher ups. With that they originated from R.H.G. where Pudd argued about killing and in turned the lea...
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on July 04, 2014
1. "Help me, please help me! I don't know where i am!" She screamed flailing her arms.
2. "Um....I don't know what to do on this question. It's really confusing me." He said pointing to a math problem.
3. Where do you live? I asked kindly. "Im from Africa" she replied.
2. "Um....I don't know what to do on this question. It's really confusing me." He said pointing to a math problem.
3. Where do you live? I asked kindly. "Im from Africa" she replied.
good only minor adjustments:
1. "I" needs to be capitalized all the time.
2. There needs to be a space between the dots and "I"
3. You forgot the quotation marks
Really great though! Could you take my Grammar Nazi quiz?
1. "I" needs to be capitalized all the time.
2. There needs to be a space between the dots and "I"
3. You forgot the quotation marks
Really great though! Could you take my Grammar Nazi quiz?
on July 05, 2014
on July 04, 2014
Everyone I renamed Legacy of DnP to Project DnP. The sequel will be called Legacy of DNP
on July 04, 2014
1. i went to england france and germany last summer.
2. Today i decides to go to the park to meets kathy and nathan.
3. coca cola are my favorite sodas
1. I went to England, France, and Germany last summer.
2. Today I decided to go to the park to meet Kathy and Nathan.
3. "Coke Soda" products are my favorite sodas
2. Today i decides to go to the park to meets kathy and nathan.
3. coca cola are my favorite sodas
1. I went to England, France, and Germany last summer.
2. Today I decided to go to the park to meet Kathy and Nathan.
3. "Coke Soda" products are my favorite sodas
Exellent. That was very good so it seems like you know your basics. These next ones need to all be put in a dialogue format.
1. Help me please help me i dont know where i am she screamed flailing her arms
2. um i dont know what to do on this question he said pointing to a math problem its really confusing me
3. where do you live i asked kindly im from africa See More▼ she replied
1. Help me please help me i dont know where i am she screamed flailing her arms
2. um i dont know what to do on this question he said pointing to a math problem its really confusing me
3. where do you live i asked kindly im from africa See More▼ she replied
on July 03, 2014
on July 03, 2014
Grammar
Excellent:
So first I'm going to give you three sentences and try to orrect the grammar and we'll go from there.
1. i went to england france and germany last summer.
2. Today i decides to go to the park to meets kathy and nathan.
3. coca cola are my favorite sodas
So first I'm going to give you three sentences and try to orrect the grammar and we'll go from there.
1. i went to england france and germany last summer.
2. Today i decides to go to the park to meets kathy and nathan.
3. coca cola are my favorite sodas
on July 02, 2014
on July 02, 2014
Anytime. Just PM any advice.
on July 02, 2014
It's Korean haha. Will help if you can give me some examples of grammar mistakes and a tiny bit of training via PM/Chat.
Oh of course! I'd love to give you some English classes! Just tell me when you want to start and we'll do it!
on July 02, 2014
on July 02, 2014
You have an Editor and Review page. I forgot I already sent you my story. I just read your stories and saw that our style is similar. Totattly forgot about you being a reviewer. Pretty awesome. Sorry for grammar. English isn't my naive language
on July 02, 2014
on July 02, 2014
http://www.qfeast.com/story/5D3b8Q/Legacy-of-DnP Here you go as requested.
Also I didn't know you was the editor user. I would't had asked. I know you got a lot of stories to read. For that I'm sorry. Forgive me
Also I didn't know you was the editor user. I would't had asked. I know you got a lot of stories to read. For that I'm sorry. Forgive me
Legacy of DnP
Pudd - The Fighter who wants to start a new path for himself. However he finds himself needing his own lifestyle to not only live but to survive Highschool. Later on once its clear on who he wants to be. He swears to be the best in the world.
Dami - Pudd's best friend or "Bro". He's a former fighter as well who wants to start a new life. He a bit of a ladies man and blames Pudd when he doesn't have mojo. Not much is known about Dami's skill compared to Pudd's..yet.
When they first get into District's 5 "Burning Flame" school. Their lives from the past and old mix together thanks to Cynthia and Nieya. What awaits them?
Editor user? What is that? And please ask! I asked people to give me their stories. There's no need to apologize but thanks for thinking about me! Btw I have already reviewed your story and put it on my page.
on July 02, 2014
on July 02, 2014