I just wrote this poem and I am looking for constructive criticism.
Reflected
I see you - reflected,
Your actions mirroring mine, and
I watch you, intensely,
Your movements flawlessly
In sync with mine. See More
It is as if I could reach out
And touch your skin
But when I extend my hand
My fingers only meet
The shiny surface
Of the mirror, in which
You are - I am - reflected.
Reflected
I see you - reflected,
Your actions mirroring mine, and
I watch you, intensely,
Your movements flawlessly
In sync with mine. See More
It is as if I could reach out
And touch your skin
But when I extend my hand
My fingers only meet
The shiny surface
Of the mirror, in which
You are - I am - reflected.
CorneliusHackl
I just edited it :)
on March 19, 2015
CorneliusHackl
Oh yeah.. :P thanks :D
on March 19, 2015
AnimePup
*sync Other than that, it's good!
on March 19, 2015
on March 19, 2015
Look what personality I've got! What about you?
Which Spirit Creature is Watching Over You?
Keruba the Wolf!
Seemingly a very fearsome creature, Keruba guards you because or your charming and clever behavior. He seems like a big mean tough guy, but on the inside, he's extremely playful and sometimes a bit sneaky. He doesn't really enjoy the idea of revenge unless it involves pranks, and then he's all in. He uses tricks, invisibility and charm-work to confuse and render his enemies helpless, but he refuses to kill. Keruba is all around a great friend to have around, but you might still need to watch your back; you never know who he'll pull his next prank on.
on March 19, 2015
You know your friend is awesome when she tells you her favorite animal is a banana.
You know your friend is awesome when she agrees to play Egyptian War (a card game) with you, using invisible cards.
You know your friend is awesome when she willingly yells out "Flamingo!" in a crowded car.
You know your friend is awesome when you show her a new app and she spends the next five hours playing it without cease.
You know your friend is awesome when she finds out a way to turn her See More brain freezes into lectures.
You know your friend is awesome when she tells you a secret that only her brother and mother also know.
~Add an awesome thing your friends do (please no swearing) in the comments!~
You know your friend is awesome when she agrees to play Egyptian War (a card game) with you, using invisible cards.
You know your friend is awesome when she willingly yells out "Flamingo!" in a crowded car.
You know your friend is awesome when you show her a new app and she spends the next five hours playing it without cease.
You know your friend is awesome when she finds out a way to turn her See More brain freezes into lectures.
You know your friend is awesome when she tells you a secret that only her brother and mother also know.
~Add an awesome thing your friends do (please no swearing) in the comments!~
on March 19, 2015
CorneliusHackl added a new chapter to Character Generator
Comment Your Results
I got...
Lila Athena Bennett, 13 years old. She has caramel hair and light blue eyes. She is shy and compassionate. Read Full Chapter
Lila Athena Bennett, 13 years old. She has caramel hair and light blue eyes. She is shy and compassionate. Read Full Chapter
on March 17, 2015
