the day everything change

the day everything change

not your average love story.. but it is close enough to it.. let tell the guys side of the story

published on October 16, 201339 reads 19 readers 6 not completed
Chapter 1.

the day i met gretchen

i'm your average cool kid, the ladies loved me, guys wanted to be me, and parents wanted their kids to be just like me. I had it all, until gretchen came to my school. Gretchen wasn't your average kid; nobody talked to her, people were scared of her, she always ate alone at lunch. Their was something about her that kept pulling me towards her. One day i was staring at her from afar and my friends noticed and asked me why was i looking at that loser. So i told them " I bet if i asked her out she would say yes" so the challenge was made and as i walked across that lunch room i knew that she was going to be mine. As i approached her, i already knew what i was going to say."Hey Gretchen i don't think you know me but i can't stop thinking how beautiful you are and how we should go out". (Now that i think about it this is really the part when i actually did like her). She looked me right in my eyes and said, "I'm not interested", and she walked off. I was speechless; no girl has every turned me down and she sure wasn't about to be my first
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MockingjayDistrict
Write more!
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on April 24, 2014
runningbay
OMG did that really happen to u ??
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on April 11, 2014
raihana
srry 4 u
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on April 11, 2014
runningbay
That had to stink badly
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on March 27, 2014
MrsTeenSwagger
nice story hunkie
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on January 12, 2014
Akane
this is a nice story!! do write more i'll be waiting
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on December 18, 2013