carly the killer the new creepypasta

A girl who thought she wasnt going to die...but she did or did she read the story to find out.

published on February 18, 2015110 reads 23 readers 14 not completed
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Chapter 3.

The killing

Carly heard whispering and laughing then she saw someone in a white jacket covered with blood and black pants.Hies skin was snow white and he had no eyelids his smile was cut in the cheeks.he got up and said "hush now GO.TO.SLEEP" he jumped on her and stabbed her  10 times. He noticed he just killed someone he knew "C-c-carly" he saod.He got no answer.he started to cry as if he killed his fdamily again. He left and  never came back.
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kyletheconjurer
MARY-SUE ALERT!!!
RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!!!
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on January 28, 2017
LunerEclipse
wicked
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carlythekiller
Thanks
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on March 03, 2015
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on March 03, 2015
Kanya888
Very good.
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carlythekiller
THANKS
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on February 20, 2015
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on February 20, 2015
Mrs.Creepypasta
Cool OC,Realistic story good outfit ^.^:p
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carlythekiller
Thanks but the oc is now a cp ^^ and thanks
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on February 19, 2015
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on February 19, 2015
gothicskittlescupcake
Love the story! Please dont tell your a fangirl of my favorite creepypasta Jeff...
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carlythekiller
Thanks it took forever to write ^^ im going to be making stories and quizzes...any ideas or requests
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gothicskittlescupcake
Creepypasta is a good idea too
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on February 18, 2015
carlythekiller
Good idea or just on creepypasta in general lol
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on February 18, 2015
gothicskittlescupcake
Your welcome, and awesome! And for a good quiz idea is mostly Sonic...alot of people love it including myself...
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on February 18, 2015
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on February 18, 2015
carlythekiller
Nope not at all i wanted to be a creepypasta and i only love jeff as a friend not fangirly like and thanks it took forever :D
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gothicskittlescupcake
Your story was so amazing! Im adding it to my favorites on qfeast
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