a murder mystery storey!

in this storey you will get to guess who did it. please tell who and why in the comments please rate so I know if I should make more.

published on March 11, 201410 reads 8 readers 4 completed

who did it

One night when Lidia was texting her boyfriend, she got a text from him that read;
IM BREAKING UP WITH U. I FOUND SOME ONE WITH PRETTIER EYES.
Lidia was so sad. She ran to her mom and dad sitting in the family room. Her mom was on the phone and her dad reading the paper with a slight smirk on his face. She told her parents what happened and sat down on the couch and cried. Her dad kept smirking and her mom stayed on her phone while listening to her daughter. Her mom told her she should go to her friend Emma`s house. Lidia thought that was a good idea so she got on her bike and rode to Emma`s house. A street away from Emmas` Lidia saw her ex-boyfriend carrying a dish that smelt like a type of noodles down the street. Not wanting to see him, Lidia took the long way to Emmas house. When she got there she told Emma all about the bad news. Emma replied back saying;
``if I did anything bad to you, I wouldn't let you go through any of that, I promise`` ``thank you, well I think you have really pretty eyes`` said Lidia kindly back. Emmas mom called for dinner. Lidia had never had a better lasagna in her life. After eating Emma and Lidia decided to go for a walk. During the walk someone killed Lidia.
WHO DID IT
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MaxGaming88
Me, I did it... I'm sorry...
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MaxGaming88
Also, I had help from Emma.
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MaxGaming88
Or was it The boyfriend? It was so long ago.
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gill_mcg
nope
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on April 15, 2014