The Island Of Pain

The Island Of Pain

John Ramsey Licit sets out on a voyage searching for an island that may not even exist. While he on this amazing adventure, he records everything in his journal.

published on December 30, 201355 reads 10 readers 7 completed
Chapter 1.

Day 1

Hello, my name is John Ramsey Licit. If you found this journal, then you will know the truth about "Death Island". I may be alive and famous, or dead and forgotten. I'm in a small boat on my way to an island that no one even knows if it exists (Death Island). I, unlike many people, believe that the island does exist. I'm on this voyage so that everyone who made fun of me or laughed at me will know that "Death Island" does actually exist. I'm west of the Atlantic Ocean and haven't found the island yet, but something is telling me that the island does exist. It's dark now, so I should get some rest.
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Comments (7)

bionicpiggy15
woah, that was good! u r an amazing writer!!!!
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TurtleLover96
I wrote this two or three years ago, and it isn't the best of my stories, so if you want something (hopefully) better written, you should read "The Elementals - Dragon Fire." I'm glad you liked it, though.
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bionicpiggy15
I will
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on December 21, 2015
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on December 20, 2015
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on December 20, 2015
Acacia_The_Goddess
Love it! But maybe add more detail, like add some feelings to the person
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TurtleLover96
Okay, thank you for the tip.
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on December 15, 2014
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on December 15, 2014
TurtleLover96
I am currently working on it to make it better, so I will consider making him name it something like that.
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on July 11, 2014
TurtleLover96
Thank you soooooo much. Not many people have been reading it.
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on June 29, 2014