All alone (1)

All alone (1)

Hey guys! i am making this story with my sister. @cupecakes. I hope you enjoy. Also, the title is chosen by my sister. This story is about this boy who loves a girl. but she loves him. then she cheats on him with his bestfriend its a shock. I hope you think the title goes with the story line. Thanks! Enjoy

published on November 13, 201367 reads 15 readers 6 completed
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Chapter 5.

Killer in town

I was packing my bags and put a knife in it. I said to myself "Well this is my only shot to kill Becky and Ben, their parents are out of town and so is mine so here's my time to shine" Mean while, i went to Becky's house and said "i'm sorry for hitting you and bumping into you can you forgive me?" She didn't reply so i all of a sudden got out my knife and stabbed her and dragged her and put her in the dustbin. Then i went to see Ben. Oh ben.. I finally arrived and knocked on the door. He said "Hey dude, i'm sorry FORGIVE ME?" I looked at him and took out my knife once more, STAB hes dead, and again i drag another person to the dustbin and put them in it. I know i've got a mean and evil mind, but its good.! I finally zipped my bag up and went to the airport but i dumped the knife somewhere no one could find it. I was on the plane heading to Spain. I couldn't actually believe i killed them. But it was totally worth it! It was their fault for messing with me. But i remembered how our my parents gonna take this? and mostly Becky and Ben's. Then i realized i dumped their bodies somewhere people could find them.. oh well i mumbled fair enough, they'll never find me though. I was finally off the plain and in Spain. I looked around and noticed it was beautiful! I decided to go find a girl and get married and children and start a new life! But i could never forget Ben or Becky. And that i murdered them..
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Nature_Neko
MORE PLZ
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on May 23, 2017
Cupecake
Thanks guys for reading this!!!! me and Ella worked our butt's off writing this story!!!!!

You can suggest some of your stories and I will sure read them because I love stories and books!!!

Thanks for your support!!!

Love Ella and Cupe
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on February 05, 2014
ellabellaboo
As soon as Cupecake calls me on skype of course then we can create it. :D well more chapters
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on November 14, 2013
Cupecake
<3 Me and EllaBellaBoo will be straight at it! <3 :3
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on November 14, 2013
xX_FallenAngel_Xx
More c:
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on November 13, 2013
Darkdeathartist
more :3
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on November 13, 2013