love has to end

love has to end

a young girl called michia had her first heart broken by a lad called mason they were a lovely cupple until this happens

published on October 06, 201390 reads 24 readers 6 not completed
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Chapter 3.
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Michia went out side to go the tuck shop with her friends, she saw mason he looked at her and said 'come hear on your own please i need to talk to you?' michia walked up to him and told her friends to wait for her.
mason said " i am really sorry i have no right to say that on a piece of paper, i do still want to be with you but ..."
michia replied upsetly " but what mason i couldnt stop crying in the bathroom today i thought you loved me but now i am wrong andray is right your a selfish horrible lad, i thought i wroong after all didnt i mason?"
mason replied back," listen michia i have loved you all this time but i only want to have a break for a couple of days ok babe?"
michia said crying,"dont you ever call me babe again mason"
michia went off to the tuck shop with her friends, she got a paket of crisp and put them in her bag for lunch because break was over.
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Comments (6)

bunnyboo13
come on dun jus cut off there that's not even a complete sentence. MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on October 12, 2013
sammyjo1
thank you guys i will make it more intresting and i will finsh it xx;)
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on October 07, 2013
R.M.OandB.M
can ufinsh it so I cn r8 it Becuz I haven't even undastood half OF IT sorry xx
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on October 06, 2013
madison1
great story so far but make it more interesting come on i like some suspense |-)
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on October 06, 2013
seippup12
man that's good stuff make more
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on October 06, 2013
zokeina
boring and why so babish|-)
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on October 06, 2013