the believer part 4

the believer part 4

the believer part 3 is in the thriller section still havent made a name for the main character

published on December 02, 201212 reads 11 readers 3 completed

fighting back

as i felt the gun in the back of my head i saw mikayla a knife came out of her sleeve and she stabbed the man in the heart she had no emotion while blood was spraying on her face she said grab the gun and so i did it had no ammo though it felt like call of duty for a few seconds then i saw a first grade student get shot in the head i was scared but mikayla told me to go and i did mikayla wasn't evegn scared she was just running and we saw more people like two of them mikayla threw her knife at one of them and i wanted to help but the gun i had has no ammo mikayla grabbed her knife and stabbed the other guy before he could even shoot her i just realized i had a phone on me i wanted to call the cops but she said no but then we heard sirens coming and then heard distant gunfire and children screaming  then a propane tank was shot and mikayla screamed watch out i looked and the next thing i saw was a flash and everything was blurr and i couldn't move i saw mikayla's face she sayec hang on then i closed my eyes then i woke up in a hospital bed and saw get well cards and some roses  then a nurse came in and gasped and called a doctor saying that im awake then the doctor came running in and said can you hear me i said yes and he said do you know how long you were out-cold i said no then he said you were out for a month i looked at him and said a month?! he said yes then a detective and a cop came in he said thatn we need you to answer some questions i said ok whats it about he said the school and i said the school why don't you ask someone else he said you and an girl are the only survivers i said what?! everyone in that school is dead that place was set to blow i looked at him and i said i will answer your questions and about an hour later he said thank you for answering our questions this will help our our investigation  i said anytime then they left then the nurse said that you have a visitor and i said is it the fbi? she chuckled and said no its your friend it was mikayla she wanted to be alone with me she needed to to me i said ok she said that she was glad she met me in the park i said im glad i met you to she said she came to visite me every day i felt happy that someone cared for me she sat on the bed next to me she said dont scare me like that again then her face got closer and the she kissed ma and i kissed her then we kissed for a minute i felt well happy then she blushed then someone came in he said so you finaly woke up i looked t see who it was and i was suprised to see who it was he said we need to talk
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TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
Cool story! Can;t wait for the rest!
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on December 03, 2012
nj3000
was there something wrong with the story cuz there are not many readers makes me sad T_T
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on December 03, 2012
nj3000
sorry it was so long but i couldnt stop typing and once again the chapter title made no sense once again
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on December 02, 2012