the believer

the believer

a 14 year old boy comes home from school and finds his family dead he sets out on a journey to find what happened to his family this is a romantic action story

published on November 26, 201234 reads 29 readers 12 completed

just a normal day

A normal day for me hearing my mom waking  me up to get ready for school and eat my breakfest and my sister constantly annoying me it was a pain in the ass at first but i got used to it as i walk to school i hoped that something good might happen to me for once in my life when i gor to school i always sat in the back corner like an outcast or a nobody. im a freak to them because of my ad-hd but i learned how to control that but still treated like that. i get bullied and the teachers do nothing they just sit there but enough of that lets move on  i was always a one to stand up and take action i acted brave i never cried but that all changed on November 29 2012. I came home from school that day and i see blood on the floor my family lying dead on the floor i cried and cried tears crawling down my cheeks, coughing and so on. and i saw a katana  on the floor  i picked it up it wasnt even used. then i saw a note on the table it had an insignia on it it was a heart with two letters ¨u¨ and ¨m¨ i called the 911.




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nj3000
Ik u will make more calm yourself friend
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on April 27, 2013
tiara2013
write more
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on April 25, 2013
SarcasticRipred
I like this It's really good
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on December 04, 2012
alwaysthebest
we need to talk...
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on December 01, 2012
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on November 30, 2012
nj3000
what do you mean by sad like the dissapointed sad or the sad that this makes me sad type of sad
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on November 27, 2012
wildcat
the story
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on November 27, 2012
wildcat
sad
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on November 27, 2012
Nobody.07
I liked it, it seems very intriguing, this isn't a "based on a true story" thing, right?? Cool idea!! (please don't cuss though)
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on November 27, 2012
nj3000
and also comment so i can see what you think
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on November 27, 2012
nj3000
if you liked this story follow me to and i will make more for your satisfaction
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on November 27, 2012
nj3000
Note that you will recieve one new chapter each time ten satisfied readers gave the story 4 or 5 stars to get a new chapter for the story
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on November 26, 2012