Unforgiven

Unforgiven

I died yesterday. I'm not accepted into heaven. But I still have a chance to get in. Why I'm not accepted, you ask? I died doing bad. I died killing my best friend. If that makes any sense. I must prove myself worthy by doing good. But not just any good deed. I must be sent back in time, to stop myself ever meeting my best friend and stop myself from being over powered by greed and manipulation.

published on October 12, 2014289 reads 36 readers 16 not completed
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Chapter 9.
Night Watch Idiots

Night Watch Idiots

Stephania's P.O.V

Have you ever imagined what it would be like to watch the sunset from a cloud. It's amazing in a nutshell. I slowly place myself on the cloud, resting my hands behind me for balance. Colours flood the sky.
"Hey, look!" Comes a voice. I spin around. "She looks ridiculous!" Says the voice again. My eyes stop on two teenage boys. They're pointing at me.
"Got a problem?!" I scream at them.
"Yeah! You're blocking the sunset!!" One of the boys screams. I gaze at their outspread wings. They're up in the sky. Flying.
"Hey, rude much?!" I scream back. The boys start laughing. They fly down to where I am. "What are you doing here anyway, aren't you supposed to be in Heaven?" I ask.
"Yeah, but we are on night watch, to make sure you don't do anything stupid, oh and it's not Heaven, it's Above," That's right, I remember what Carasolla said, she asked how Above was, not how Heaven was. I glare at the boys.
"Are you sure you're qualified, you seem very immature," I say coldly. One of the boys sighs.
"ELI GET YOUR BUT OVER HERE!" He screams. I'm immediately on my feet. The boy who didn't scream curses under his breath.
"Damn it Damian, don't get Eli," He murmurs. I look at the boy he called Damian. He has chestnut brown hair and mischievous emerald eyes. The other boy has auburn hair and light brown eyes. The boys talk quietly with the occasional shout or swear word. It makes you wonder how they even made it into Above. Then, I hear it.
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ChocolerryPOP
Beautiful simply marvelous!
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on March 23, 2016
EyelessIngrid
Awesome!!
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on December 10, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Love. Love. LOVE IT! :)
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on December 10, 2014
JeweledOwl812
Really awesome! Some minor spelling mistakes, but great writing!
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Sarbar1010
Yeah, I noticed them but haven't had time to go through and fix them. :)
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on December 09, 2014
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on December 09, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Yay!! :D
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on December 09, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Awesome new update! Write more soon!
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on December 08, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Write more!!!!!!
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on October 20, 2014
NeonTiger
Awesome! (Yes! I finally read it! ;) :P )
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on October 20, 2014
Aliyss
Love it
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on October 18, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Write more soon!
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on October 15, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Dark, but seems like an interesting plot!
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on October 14, 2014
DarkAngel1204
I like it :) it's different write more!
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on October 12, 2014
Jeweled_Feather
Dark but cool
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on October 12, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Too dark for my taste
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on October 12, 2014
Ravenclaw3243
AMAZING!!!!!!
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on October 12, 2014