Unforgiven

Unforgiven

I died yesterday. I'm not accepted into heaven. But I still have a chance to get in. Why I'm not accepted, you ask? I died doing bad. I died killing my best friend. If that makes any sense. I must prove myself worthy by doing good. But not just any good deed. I must be sent back in time, to stop myself ever meeting my best friend and stop myself from being over powered by greed and manipulation.

published on October 12, 2014289 reads 36 readers 16 not completed
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Chapter 15.
A Little Help, a Little Relief, a lot of Danger

A Little Help, a Little Relief, a lot of Danger

I snap awake at the sound. The sound of footsteps hurtling towards me. I push slowly off the cloud. You'd expect a cloud to be light and fluffy but no, it's as hard as rock. Well I guess these clouds aren't like real clouds, otherwise you'd just keep on falling and that would be highly annoying. I focus my mind back on the footsteps. I can't quite tell who it is as the light of day is shining brightly and my eyes need to adjust. I blink several times and rub my eyes on my sleeve, trying to wake up.
"Get up, we leave in ten minutes!" Comes a frantic voice.
"Huh?" I question tiredly. "Leave where?"
'Come on Stephania, I woke up three hours ago with no trouble what-so-ever!" My eyes focus on the person towering above me. I see wings trailing on the ground, lined with silver and gold. My eyes widen. I immediately on my feet.
"S-sorry!" I stammer. I can't believe I forgot. Wait, did he say we leave? Should it not be I leave? "Do I go now?" I ask.
"Whoa, calm down, first of all, we leave in ten, second, I have to come to see this Dark Angel, council's orders," This Dark Angel on first day thing must be really serious.
"Okay,"

Eli repeatedly checks his watch. Waiting for the time.
"Okay, It's time," He tells me. I nod. "Oh and by the way, the rules don't count when we're down, so sorry if I smile too much, I haven't been able to for so long!" I'm about to remind him about the two times he smiled at me but my words are interrupted. Eli clutches my wrist hard as the white and golden light dances around us, he wears a straight and confident face. A face that reads 'Let's do this'.

The light fades and my surroundings appear. I'm in the school corridor, luckily it's the one nobody uses. Eli stands in front of me. My eyes widen. It's so strange seeing him without wings. I guess I look different too. I place my left hand on my glasses. Eli turns around, a smile from ear to ear. Then he looks at me strangely.
"Stephania? Is that you?" He asks. I slip my glasses off, my surrounding nebulous. "Oh," I quickly put my glasses back on.
"You look different yourself," I say.
"Yeah, no wings," I nod.
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ChocolerryPOP
Beautiful simply marvelous!
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on March 23, 2016
EyelessIngrid
Awesome!!
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on December 10, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Love. Love. LOVE IT! :)
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on December 10, 2014
JeweledOwl812
Really awesome! Some minor spelling mistakes, but great writing!
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Sarbar1010
Yeah, I noticed them but haven't had time to go through and fix them. :)
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on December 09, 2014
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on December 09, 2014
DarkAngel1204
Yay!! :D
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on December 09, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Awesome new update! Write more soon!
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on December 08, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Write more!!!!!!
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on October 20, 2014
NeonTiger
Awesome! (Yes! I finally read it! ;) :P )
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on October 20, 2014
Aliyss
Love it
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on October 18, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Write more soon!
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on October 15, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Dark, but seems like an interesting plot!
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on October 14, 2014
DarkAngel1204
I like it :) it's different write more!
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on October 12, 2014
Jeweled_Feather
Dark but cool
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on October 12, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Too dark for my taste
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on October 12, 2014
Ravenclaw3243
AMAZING!!!!!!
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on October 12, 2014