If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

If Percy Jackson said 'yes'

In The Last Olympian when Percy is given the choice of a gift and the gods offer him immortality, what if he said yes? (+extra story line!)

published on June 16, 2014347 reads 34 readers 41 completed
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Chapter 2.

Those Dam Goodbyes

I held my breath as I was thrown about in the current.  I couldn't help but be reminded of my strange bath in the river Styx, except this time, there was nothing to keep me bound to mortality.  I could feel energy surging through my body like the pool was actually liquid adrenalin, and I was drowning in it.  I was being tossed and thrown around in circles under the surface that wouldn't let me come up for air.  I fought against myself, but soon the burning sensation in my lungs was too great and I sucked in a big gulp of whatever this stuff was.  I felt like there was a bit of oxygen bubbles in it, and this was the only way I could possibly survive.  I took more huge gulps, still trying to push my way to the surface.  Finally my head broke the surface and the pool seemed to spit me out.  I landed flat on my back, coughing up the whatever-it-was and rolling over to spit it out.  I rolled back on to my back to see Apollo standing over me smiling like a mad man.  He just stood there staring at me and grinning so long it creeped me out.
   "What?"  I couldn't help asking as I pushed myself up to a sitting position.  Apollo's smile grew, if that was even possible, and it was only then that I realized he was in his divine form.  The one that disintegrates mortals upon sight.  I huffed out a laugh and stood up carefully.  How embarrassing would it be if I fell on my butt.  My dam butt.  I held back a laugh that would have come out as a sob if I let it escape.  Dam, I missed Zoe.  This time I smiled despite myself.
   "What?"  It was Apollo's turn to be confused.  I smiled wider, and so did he, and I said,
   "The dam gift shop."  And started laughing like crazy.  He laughed too, but I think it was because I looked so ridiculous, not because he got the joke.  I walked down a corridor with him, trying to ignore my shimmering skin as my laughter faded.  He stopped me at the end of the tunnel and turned to me,
   "You probably want to say goodbye, huh?"  I didn't answer but he could read my face.  "I won't tell anyone, lets just go quick."  He grabbed me by the shoulder and I found myself at the top of Half-Blood Hill, right by Thalia's tree and a startled, sleepy dragon.  Behind me, Apollo said, "After you."  And we started walking down.  I noticed he was in his mortal form, and I figured I was too.  That sounded weird in my head.
   Soon, we found ourselves at the Athena cabin.  Apollo opened the door and motioned for me to go in.  I couldn't help but think how glad I was that he was helping me instead of anyone else.  We had a history, and he wasn't exactly the scariest god in the world.
   I slowly crept inside and heard soft weeping coming from under the covers of the bed I know as Annabeth's.  There was no one else in the room so I made my way over to it carefully.  I rested my hand on the sobbing lump of girlfriend I had tossed heartlessly away and stroked back and forth.
   "Go away.  I only want Percy."  She mumbled through the layers of blankets and her tears.
   "Well good, because it's me."  I said moving the blankets away from her face.  Her scared grey eyes rested on me and she brushed a piece of beautiful blonde hair out of her face.  She shuddered and I was glad I wasn't smiling.
   "How could you, Seaweed Brain?"  The use of the nickname made it hurt even more.  I wanted to apologize but I knew no amount of 'I'm Sorry' s could make up for what I had done.  
   Faster than lightning she hopped out from under the covers with her Celestial Bronze dagger in hand, swiping at my arms and face.  What ever I just took a bath in must have washed away the blessing of Achilles, because the dagger pierced my skin in every place it touched.  She thrust it one last time into my left shoulder and yanked it out, its shiny surface coated in golden ichor.  I realized it was covering my body, oozing from all the scratches and stabs Annabeth hit.  But the one place she had hurt the most wasn't bleeding.  It was safe inside my body, beating in it's slow drumming rhythms.  It really shouldn't be.
   As much as I was in pain, I still loved Annabeth, and I needed to do one more thing before I left her.
   "Those dam goodbyes."  I whispered and pulled her against me in a close hug.  She dropped her dagger and grabbed my scratched up face and whispered back,
   "Those dam I love you's."  And pressed me into the best kiss in the entire world, and nothing else mattered except the lessening space between our bodies and my lips on hers.

And it was pretty much the best good bye kiss ever...
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Emoshadowqueen
The ending is so sad ?
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on October 24, 2020
ArtemisMoon91904
@Animefan224 @CrystalDiamond2323 @JeweledOwl812 @MockingjayDistrict Do any of you want to see a squeal for this? I know it's been a while, I was just wondering...
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ArtemisMoon91904
@CrystalDiamond 2323 thanx. Did you really cry? Or...? Just curious.
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on July 17, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! *wipes tears*
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ArtemisMoon91904
U read it all?
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MockingjayDistrict
The. Ending. Was. Ugh! You're an awesome writer, but at the moment the fate Rick Riordan had for Percabeth in The Last Olympian was to my liking. You are a VERY talented writer though!
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ArtemisMoon91904
And thank you for the compliments. :)
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on June 22, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Good, I would hate to see that you liked this fate better. I wanted a point to coma across that Rick made Percy choose the right thing.
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MockingjayDistrict
If Annabeth doesn't become a goddess I'm going to die.
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ArtemisMoon91904
I finished it... get some tissues
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on June 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
I. Will. Die.
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MockingjayDistrict
FOREVER PERCABETH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
And EVER
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
And ever
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on June 19, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
As. In. Be. Dead. FOREVER
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on June 19, 2014
JeweledOwl812
AMAZIN!!
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JeweledOwl812
*gets tissues*
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ArtemisMoon91904
lol good idea! :)
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ArtemisMoon91904
Awww! Thnx so much JeweledOwl812! I'm working on another chapter right now that might make you cry so hold on to your computer screen!
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ArtemisMoon91904
THANK YOU!
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Welllllll..... I dont want to spoil for you cuz it might ruin it, but I can give you a hint if you want?
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Can he reunite with Annabeth and she'll become a goddess or something?
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ArtemisMoon91904
Hey, If you don't mind could you rate the story please?
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on June 17, 2014
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ArtemisMoon91904
Oh and who should he visit after his mom, Grover or Tyson?
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ArtemisMoon91904
Ok Grover it is!
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Enchilada boy!
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ArtemisMoon91904
I have something in mind for a happy ending for them, don't worry. ;)
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ArtemisMoon91904
You know what, never mind. Sad endings are more 'makes you cry' type thing.
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on June 20, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Percabeth forever!!!! Can you private message me what will happen?
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MockingjayDistrict
:(( It's sad, I'm just glad Percy didn't say yes. Anyway, PERCABETHHHHHHHHHHHHH oh and the Nico thing... AWKWARD
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ArtemisMoon91904
I'm gonna write some more now, ok? Be ready!!!
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on June 17, 2014
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ArtemisMoon91904
IKR! I love that you like my stuff. My dam stuff...
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MockingjayDistrict
It is physically possible for you to be able to ask my name.
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on June 17, 2014
ArtemisMoon91904
Lol, you're amazing! Can I ask what your name is, MockingjayDistrict?
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on June 17, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
It is almost as good as dam pizza
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Animefan224
I liked it, but I like what Percy chose in the books more. Great Job!:)
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ArtemisMoon91904
Thanks, and I liked what happened in the book, too, but I thought it would be cool to bring this reality to life as well.
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