Songs I Make

if you know me you know i like making songs stories poems, etc. heres some of the songs i made and reminer : never said they were good. also theres instructions on how to read it by the title.

published on April 10, 201962 reads 22 readers 9 not completed
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Chapter 2.

Hopes and Dreams killed ( t=there is no way to read this read it normal)

Cant argue with facts
can see the blood joy look at that
so abandonned? left behind like a mistake?
theres a feeling of pain that i just cant shake
forgotten? remebered? but still not attained?
i going numb thinking about it, im going insane.
not taken care of? dumped automatically?
maybe somethings wrong with me maybe schrizophrenically.
not enough? never was never will?
say it again all my hopes and dreams are killed.
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FuckYou
Good job me
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on August 14, 2019
caspertheminorman
I may make a few changes, but could I see if I could actually make one of them a (crappy) guitar + singing cover?
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DemonQueen
id be honored. @mildly.annoyedpringle
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on May 24, 2019
DemonQueen
of course! @mildly.annoyedpringle
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caspertheminorman
alright!
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on May 24, 2019
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on May 22, 2019
Queenofshadows
WOAH!! :3 NICE!!
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DemonQueen
tanks
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DemonQueen
:D
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on April 10, 2019
Queenofshadows
Ya Welcome
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