Glitchy Bree 'Re-Written

I just thought the pasta could be better. I actually gave her a back story...

published on September 17, 201527 reads 8 readers 0 not completed
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Chapter 3.

Bree Joins the Pastas.

Bree ran away from the school, and into a dark woods. There she found two chains with iron balls welded to them beside a lake. Knowing who they were me and for, she tied them to her hands and drowned herself. But she awoke as a monster... The trees cast eerie shadows onto the ground and occasionally, Bree would hear the sound of someone stepping on a twig. Bree knew immediately that she was in Slender Woods. Then, she heard a voice. "Get! B- (tic) Back here! I- (tic) told you that if you (tic) touched my (tic) stuff then I would (tic) Make you re- (tic) Regret it! Then, she heard what sounded like water spilling and then crying. Bree went to the source of the sounds. She felt as if she was being watched. When she got there, she saw two males. One  had Brown hair and looked somewhat steampunk, as the other was shorter and looked a lot like Link from The Legend of Zelda. Bree spoke. "B-BEN? Ticci Toby!?!"
  Toby looked at the stunned girl and BEN moved closer to her. "W-(tic) Who are you?", Toby asked. Bree looked down at the ground for a second. "My name is Bree, and I am a glitch!" BEN gasped as Toby looked at him. "It there (tic) something you are not (tic) Telling me?" BEN laughed sheepishly. "Heh... I know her. She's my girlfriend." Toby gasped. "B-(tic) Bree? Have you ever (tic) killed somebody?" Bree looked at Toby. "No, but I know who to start with..." She said with a pasta-worthy smile...
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