Human-Hedgehog

Let me explain this. You all remember Qfeast's very own 'sapphirethehedgehog'? She made a series of quizzes for a Sonic WWFFY (Who Will Fall For You?). I tried them out and non-stop I got Sonic! So I thought why not make a story based on it? The chapters will be told from the view of either Sonic, or my character Jackie. Also, before we start, this story is dedicated to 'sapphirethehedgehog' and 'Alexishedgebat', the stars of the Sonic WWFFY's! Their fan characters WILL appear in this story.

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Human-Hedgehog
Chapter 2.
'Alien' Encounter

'Alien' Encounter

Jackie
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My life is usually the same. Day in and day out.
On a school day I wake up to a breakfast of toast with a side of orange juice, then rush back upstairs to get dressed. I switch on my hair straighteners and brush my hair before straightening it, grab a snack for break, sort out my money for my lunch, then catch the bus for school.
At school, I get bullied like no tomorrow.
First class, the emos trip me over.
Second class straight after, I like to read. The jocks try to steal my book all the time, but the teacher always catches them.
At break, the popular kids push and trip me down the stairs.
Third class, the jocks are back. This time, they use the work as an excuse to call me rude names.
Lunch, and the popular kids threaten me into giving them my lunch money. They always get it, and I always end up starving.
Then last 2 classes, the jocks - AGAIN - bash my head with their books.
But it doesn't stop there.
When I log into my Facebook at home, I usually find hate posts sent to me.
"Haha, when we tripped you down the stairs and left you to starve, what you get for being different!"
I close my laptop and find my mother in the kitchen.
"Jackie. There you are. I'm going away for a few months. Will you be okay on your own?"
"Yes mum, I'll be fine," I reply. "I'm just going out for some fresh air."
"All right, sweetheart. Be good. Don't do anything troublesome while I'm gone. Promise?"
"I promise mum. I love you," I tell her, wrapping my arms around her body.
She kisses my forehead and says, "I love you too" before I walk towards the door.

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With my mother somewhere else in the world, my father dead for the past 7 years, and no siblings, I'm really on my own.
I walk towards the park, looking up at the stars. They're so beautiful tonight. And one that shines the brightest.
A shooting star, it is. I close my eyes and make a wish. A wish that I had at least one friend.
But I look closer, and I see it is hurling towards me.
Towards me!
Oh God!
I run and climb the nearest tree, as high as I can. The hurling object crashes in the ground with a loud THUD!
A door opens, and strange creatures emerge.
What are they?
Aliens?
They seem scary at first. But then I see the blue spikey one. His green eyes glisten in the moonlight. He looks so brave, yet so kind-hearted.
The 'aliens' all turn to the green one, and I can hear their shouts.
"Nice going, Manic," the yellow one shouts at him first. "We're in the middle of a park. On EARTH!"
The white one holds up his palms, and traps the green one in a bubble. "Bad Manic! Bad!"
"Can you please stop arguing? It doesn't help us get back home to Mobius," the blue one shouts. His voice is clearly heard, because the others stop arguing.
Mobius?
What's Mobius?
I step back, but the branch I'm standing on snaps, as I fall to the ground.
"We got a spy," the green one says, looking at my direction.
The white one walks up to me and reaches out his hand to me. "Don't worry, we're friendly."
I'm too shocked to take his hand, so I get up by myself and run.
They start to run after me after a few seconds, and I hide in the closest bush.
"Where did she go?" I hear the purple one say. He has such a low voice.
"This girl's a good hider," the blue one says. "Split up and look for her."
Before I can get a chance to peak out and see what's going on, the red one has me on his shoulder.
"Put me down," I shout. "Put me down now!"
"Put her down Knux," the blue one orders, and the red one obeys.
They all crowd around me for a closer look.
"She's seen us," the black and red one says. "We have to take her home with us."
"No way Shadow, we can't just snatch her up," the yellow one says. "They'll be search parties."
They all turn to the blue one as if he is the leader, who looks at me.
"We can't take her," he says. "She'll have to stay, as long as she promises not to tell anyone."
He offers out his hand to me, and I take it as he helps me up.
"I'm Sonic," he says. "Sonic the Hedgehog. And these are my friends, Shadow, Silver, Tails, Knuckles, Espio, and Manic."
The others wave at me and they say hi in their own way.
"I'm Jackie. Pleased to meet you all," I say.
"THE Jackie?" Knuckles questions me.
"What do you mean?"
"We're gonna come clean, Jackie," Sonic says. "We need your help. Our home is in danger and it's rumoured you're the only one who can save it. Will you help us?"
I look at the others who all give me the thumbs up.
It must be true.
I look back at Sonic and nod. "Okay."
Tails walks over to the capsule the boys arrived in. "Great. It's gonna take a while for this to reboot."
"How long we talking here?" Shadow asks.
"About a month."
"Don't worry," I say. "My mother's away for a few months, so my house is free for you guys to stay in. Come on, I'll show you."
For once, I finally have friends.
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Noescaping
I'm going it's been so long dude, you need to finish this, it'd be so cool
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Weiss_Schnee
Ik. I'm actually going to claim this story as obsolete, and make a new version. I mean, this was copied from sapphire's quizzes.
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Noescaping
Yeah
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on March 30, 2017
sapphirethehedgehog
Update 8D
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on November 24, 2014
AlwaysBeInfinite
I've just read this whole story and my face in the other side of the screen is like: 8D and XD, PLEASE!!!!! Write more!!!
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on September 19, 2014
Noescaping
Yay Jackie!
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Weiss_Schnee
Woo I am awesome at singing now! XD
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on June 20, 2014
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on June 20, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Eep! Go Jackie!
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on June 20, 2014
Cristallite
Awesme
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on June 19, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Lol, I love conserts
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Weiss_Schnee
XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
Sure, I don't mind :)
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on June 18, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Also, the singing part up on the stage, I was thinking of adding an extra song before the one I got in my result. That okay? I was thinking Don't Stop by 5 Seconds of Summer
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on June 18, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Also, can't wait for part 15! For some reason I'm always hyped up on peace serum whenever I take a quiz in your WWFFY series XD
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on June 18, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Yay! Can't wait!
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on June 18, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
I'm about to start writing next chapter
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on June 18, 2014
Noescaping
I got the emerald. :D
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Weiss_Schnee
XD
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Noescaping
:P
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on June 16, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Aw! And yay! Its out!
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Weiss_Schnee
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on May 22, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
LOL! My wwffy is confuzzling! :p
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on May 22, 2014
Noescaping
Lol. XD. A race to the showers!
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on May 10, 2014
Noescaping
Alexis: THIS IS WHAT YOU GET WHEN YOU STEAL MAH GUMMY BEARS!!! X-(
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on May 10, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
XD BEST PRANK EVA!
Sapphire: *laughing*
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on May 10, 2014
Noescaping
Silver: Sorry I had Alexis gummy bears.
Everyone: WHAT!
Alexis: YOUR DEAD WEED HEAD!! *tackles Silver*.
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on May 10, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Jackie: *on the floor dying of laughter*
Sonic: Yes it can wait! We're still going tonight, but only if you calm down!
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on May 10, 2014
Noescaping
Alexis: Lol.
Silver: NO IT CANT!!! IT'S MY TRUE LOVE!!! DX
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on May 10, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Jackie: XD
Sonic: Shut up Silver, Pizza Hut can wait.
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on May 10, 2014
Noescaping
Alexis: I guess.... :(
Silver: PIZZA HUT!!! XD
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on May 10, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Jackie: It's just like Shadow to hide things. He doesn't like admitting things. Not after... Maria...
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on May 10, 2014
Noescaping
Alexis: Sonic would want to admit it but Shadow.... *looks down*. :(
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on May 10, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Jackie: So?
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on May 10, 2014
Noescaping
Alexis: Not that. Shadow is different than Sonic.
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on May 10, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Jackie: Why do you think that? I'm different cuz I was human, but it doesn't bother Sonic, or me.
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on May 10, 2014
Noescaping
Alexis: I know but Shadow and I are...different. :">
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on May 10, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Jackie: Aww come on, I'm embarrassed at the fact that everyone knows Sonic and I might be hooking up, but I'm not looking away.
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on May 10, 2014
Noescaping
Alexis: Because of what they were talking about. :">
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on May 10, 2014
Weiss_Schnee
Jackie: What's wrong Alexis? Why you looking away?
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on May 10, 2014
Noescaping
:"> *looks away from everyone but still laughs*.
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on May 10, 2014
JustineTheCat
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA LOVE THE PRANK!!!!!!
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on May 10, 2014
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