the story of ben drowned

Suicide dreamers if your reading I hope you enjoy also for all the other readers THIS IS NOT THE EXACT STORY it's my version however.. It is accurate to the theme so.. ENJOY!

published on September 14, 201620 reads 13 readers 2 completed
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Chapter 2.

The drowning

When Ben got home every day his mum and dad would treat him like dirt and make him to do the chores they were supposed to do, like go to the store make supper clean the gutters. And they never EVER thanked him when he got done with chores his perents would say "okay go torture link now before your break is over" Ben would smile and run to his controller he would choose his main account and start playing the legend of Zelda then he would continue torturing link his mum and dad would watch him and discuss why he hated a video game so much. Later in the day Ben went to bed and then the next day he went to school tomorrow was Saturday so he was parshelly excited to go to school because when he got back it would just be breaks and then the next day chores chores chores break chores chores chores chores break. But when Ben got to school everyone was staring at him weirdly and giggling. Ben ran around the halls so he would not get noticed as much and got to his class as fast as he could. LATER THAT DAY. Ben got home and the classmates from earlier were all there he walked to the living room to play the legend of Zelda but the controller tv and the Nintendo were all broken into pieces  some classmates walked up behind him and tied him up as Ben cried because the only thing he liked in his life was broken the classmates carried him outside to the sight of bens mum and dad and other classmates were there the classmates holding brought him to the backyard witch had a pool that his perents got they threw him in and Ben had drowned down there the next day his classmates came over again to see his dead body but all that was left in the pool for two blue eyes then Ben came up behind them in a link costume but he did not have eyes and blood was streaming down his eye sockets. Those kids never picked on Ben again and can never pick on anyone else again. After that Ben became Ben DROWNED the murderer.   

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Lapis10for
Again. Thanks for reading!
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on September 15, 2016
Lapis10for
I hope you enjoyed! If you have any ideas for another story or a part 2 then comment below

Thanks for reading!

-lapis
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on September 14, 2016