The Cracked Doll

The Cracked Doll

Emma Coma moved into a Victorian house with her family, her mom, dad, and sister. She picked her room on the top floor and looked around. A floor board creaked, she pulled up the floor board to see an old doll under it. A long crack was found on the dolls back..but is the doll just a normal one? After a few days, things started getting weird...so find out yourself.

published on October 12, 201569 reads 23 readers 10 not completed
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Chapter 2.
Entry One; May 10th, 1820

Entry One; May 10th, 1820

Hello, I am glad my mum allowed me to have you! She does not approve of women having a book to write in. She think's that only men should have books to write in. She finally allowed me to have you though! I am truly grateful that I have you! Emma likes you to, and she is also thankful for you. Emma is my doll, long brown curly hair and a beautiful dress. I have had Emma ever since I was born, she had always been with me. My mum does not really like Emma, but I do. She has always been with me, so I will always be with her. Oi, I must be going now! My mum and pa are calling me to come and eat. I wish not, but I must. Ta ta for now lovely!
Love,
Sara
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Kinnare
One more chapter and I can sleep easy
Otherwhise I'm gonna have chlaustrophobia infested dreams for the rest of my life
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simple_sheep
okay I'm fixing the grammar errors right now (not Jane's texting of course) and adding on slightly more to the chapters then I'll write a new one
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Kinnare
Yay okay
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simple_sheep
Wait..someone...cares about this..?
HOLY BALLS I'M GONNA WORK ON IT
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purplegiraffe
is there another chapter? i wanna read more!!!
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simple_sheep
heh im workin on it ;)
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on October 13, 2015
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Art.By.God
I gave it 5 stars. It's awesome! :D
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simple_sheep
really? yay! :D i feel special X3 B)
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on October 12, 2015
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simple_sheep
no one? jeez i expected at lease two people to like this story
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simple_sheep
wow 4 people! :D:D:D
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