What to do?

What to do?

DO NOT READ FROM START TO FINISH. This is a 'choose your own adventure story'. At the end of each chapter it there will be a few choices. Choose what you will & proceed to the correlating chapter. When you reach one ending, begin the fun again!

published on June 29, 2014129 reads 25 readers 6 not completed
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Chapter 13.

Thirteen

You duck down to the corner and into the general store.
It's quaint, the kind of store you might expect to have a bell above the door. It doesn't.
What it does have is a magazine rack with a refreshingly celebrity-gossip-mag free selection, a stand selling everything from umbrellas to perfume, and a lolly-lined counter covered with colourful confectionaries to tempt children to nag parents, and a rotating display of birthday and post cards.
It's quaint, the kind of store you might expect to have a bell above the door. It doesn't. A fact that may very well have  just saved your life. Because also in this store is a table, seating five burly men in black suits.
They have guns.
From the fact that their backs are to you and they're speaking in hushed tones you infer they didn't hear you enter and haven't seen you. Yet.
These are not people you want to mess with. The question is, do you risk being heard if you leave, or risk being found if you hide?

Back out the door to chapter

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magic101
Such a good story!!!! Continue!!!!!
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on November 09, 2014
Silverfoxy8
More!
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on October 12, 2014
ShakiraK
Its really cool - keep going!
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on September 11, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
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JeweledOwl812
Write more! I luv it!
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on July 01, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Write more!
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on June 29, 2014