The Fallen

The Fallen

I looked up and saw someone tied to wooden post. I looked closer and realized that it was me! What? Then I remembered that I was looking from Aiden’s point of view. I looked beside me and saw Aunt Riles, she has tears rolling down her face and was clutching Aiden’s hand. I just realized that everyone is chanting some… “Kill the witch, kill the witch, kill the witch!” Wait what? I looked around. Oh my god, we are in the Salem Witch Trials!

published on April 30, 201420 reads 9 readers 3 not completed
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Chapter 3.

Authors Note

So this my first thing to ever try to write, so if anyone reads this I appreciate if you can give me some advice on what you think I should do to improve my writing. Thank you! :))
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xx_creative_disaster_xx
Aw Thank you guys! If y'all want to read the rest of what I've got you can go follow me on Quotev.com ... or click on the link in my bio @aliyss @crimsonthehedgehog
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on May 01, 2014
Aliyss
Amazing story<3
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on April 30, 2014
Cristallite
Nice!
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on April 30, 2014