My Poetry and the Like

My Poetry and the Like

Title's pretty self-explanatory. This ranges a lot from dark and scary to light and happy!

published on April 15, 201492 reads 25 readers 9 not completed
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Chapter 7.
The Footsteps of my Storm (not exactly a poem)

The Footsteps of my Storm (not exactly a poem)

With every tremendous step, the snap of banging thunder ricocheted throughout the charred clouds.
With the stars as my only twinkling audience, I let loose my blazing blade of immaculate light that split the heavens with one crackling sweep.
My wolves howled the winds of the night creating such a gale the very trees shook with the terror that ripped through my constricted chest.
A tight and stretched grin held my laughing face in a visage of a cackling statue.
The diamond droplets pounded onto the dewy ground beneath my enlightened feet.
With greedy eyes, I stared down upon the quavering earth and felt the power of my storm buzz through my stretched fingers.
My wolves ran unleashed dragging the clouds behind their fast paws and I laughed as the rain pounded my face and the lightning lit up the blackened night.
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Comments (9)

MockingjayDistrict
Wow, all these poems are beautiful. I live the way you described Darkness with human traits and characteristics. If I didn't know better I would have thought these poems were written by a professional. You could really become famous from writing!
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Elleyd
Thank you :D
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on July 03, 2014
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on July 03, 2014
Nightcat
whoa...................these are like story-poems :D the language is amazing, description and feels and too much amazing stuff for my brain *bang*
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Elleyd
haha xD and yea the last two arent really poems just descrptions
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 29, 2014
MMMMMMM6
You should definitely submit this to a competition or something. Even if you don't win you will still get your work out there. That's what ive been doing :)
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on June 02, 2014
MissFattyPattyPoo
Cool! I luv them!
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on April 26, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
You are such an amazing writer! I cannot express in words the extents of your talents! (LOL that sounded like I was some sophisticated British socialite)
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on April 26, 2014
Tariyukimew
beautiful ^~^
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on April 21, 2014
threebeltking
THESE ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!
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on April 15, 2014