SHORT Remake of the Hunger Games!!

SHORT Remake of the Hunger Games!!

Featuring guest stars Katniss and Peeta Mellark. This is as if they rebels had lost the war, and the Games continued. And as punishment, Katniss and Peeta have to mentor every D. 12 tribute. It is the 4th Quarter Quell and there is a *special* change to excite the Capitol people... This is about a 12 year old trying to outsmart the Game Makers and stay alive...

published on November 28, 2012158 reads 27 readers 12 not completed
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Chapter 10.

Allies

I stretch out and throw the bag with my  canteen and blanket in it. I keep the straw and darts in my pocket and compass in hand. I take off at a jog heading away from where the tributes from earlier went. I turn so that I think I'm heading back to the Cornucopia. I jog for forever it seems, but I suddenly freeze, leaping behind a tree as I hear a loud yelling.
    "Stop!" a girl screams.
    "You have to clean it, it'll get infected.!" A boy yells back.
    "It hurts!" This girl yells out.
    "Damn it, I don't care!" This boy's voice yells. She suddenly yells out and begins to cry and sob.
I take a deep breath and peek around the tree. A girl sits on the ground, clutching her leg, tears pouring from her eyes.
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Comments (12)

Idiot_Killjoy
You have the right idea and very clever quarter quell idea! Although, I think you need to slow down, describe the sourrounding a little more, a bit more dialoge, more characters, and I would like to be able to get to know Aspen a bit more :) if you added these things I think it would be very exciting!! Also, I hope this doesn't offend you in any way!! That's See More▼
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on June 20, 2013
Nobody.07
i don't know how to finish it. @.@
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on April 05, 2013
Thehost
Ausome it just needs to be finished
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on February 02, 2013
Nobody.07
@Charlie-... 8( Was it bad and just needs to hurry up and be done?!? Or as in it's good and you want to read it.. ??
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on January 01, 2013
charlie.clements.7
PLZ FINISH SOOn!!!
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on December 26, 2012
Nobody.07
:D thnx!
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on December 08, 2012
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
I just have to say...again...that this is an AWESOME story!! Can't wait for the rest!!:)
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on December 08, 2012
Nobody.07
:3 yay!! I love it when my stuff is loveable! haha!! I all ready have the beginning of the actual Game beginning planned out :D
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on December 06, 2012
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
@Leigh07 Yes, I did!
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on December 05, 2012
SarcasticRipred
This is good!!
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on December 04, 2012
Nobody.07
Thank you, I tried to make it shorter than my last one, did you like the Quarter Quell surprise??
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on November 29, 2012
TheDoctorsAwesomestAssistant
Awesome remake!:)
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on November 29, 2012