an unexpected event

in this story a girl called emerald gets hit by a car and ends up in a coma, but when she is in the coma, something happens, something unexplained and unexpected...

published on June 04, 201375 reads 16 readers 3 completed
an unexpected event
Chapter 1.

happy days!

'hey Anne,' said emerald, over the phone 'how are you?'
'fine.' Anne replied, it was getting late and Anne's curfew had just started.
'look I'm going to the club tonight, will you call Marie and tell her i will be at paradox?'
'all right, bye'
'bye'
emerald started out the door and made it halfway before she was attacked by pride, her brothers pet cat.
'leave off, pride!!!' she exclaimed 'mom, I'm going to paradox!'
'ok honey, don't be too late back'
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KittyClaw
That Was So Emotional it made me sad but I was happy when she woke up good story :(( :)
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darkrose88888888
Thanks! I was only 13 then though so it could be better...
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on August 31, 2013
darkrose88888888
in chapter 7 it supposd 2 b voice not ocie soz every1
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on June 04, 2013