The Fighters - Part 1

The Fighters - Part 1

Hello again and this is a story that people's characters live in a town with good and bad thing but what will happen when two closest friends betray.This is a Many parts to this.Leave a comment if you want more.

published on June 29, 201722 reads 5 readers 13 not completed
Chapter 1.
The Talk

The Talk

There were eight  friends who stay along side each other but one day two of them change" Hey Skylar " Mayla said running to her." Yeah what's up " Skylar said to Mayla "Well two of our friends turn evil " Mayla  said seeing a  anthro fox person with a white tee shirt with a orange hoodie with blue cargo pants "Hey Mayla,Skylar " Amaze said " Hey Amaze,Mayla, and Skylar  " Alexander said walking over us with Jax,Buddy,Maine.Mayla just walked away and hide somewhere" Why did Mayla do that " Amaze ask Skylar
" I don't know honesty " Skylar told Amaze.They wanted to know why Mayla ran away " Hey Mayla " Amaze said looking worried."Look I don't want to talk  about it " Mayla said moving away form Amaze and Skylar. "But why " Skylar moving towards Mayla. Mayla moved and accidently push Jax over.Jax didn't care she just got up and looked at Mayla. "...sorry" Mayla siad shyly "What ever Mayla " Jax said looking at Mayla " Anyways we need to get back to the discussion " Amaze said " Ok "
Mayla said. " How did they change " Skylar asked " I don't know how but they change " Mayla answered shyly " True "  Amaze agreed." Well we can never be sure " Alexander answered along with Buddy." So, if you don't mind me asking Mayla..." Maine started " Im not going to talk about it" Mayla said mad. " Ok thats understanding " Maine said looking down shocked " Well anyways hows everybody doing today " Amaze said.Mayla didn't say anything Mayla's day wasn't going good because she got bullied earlier."Oh...I get it " Skylar said "Why don't the bullies leave you alone " Amaze asked " They just think that just because. Ihave one weapon they think that I'm weak " Mayla said.
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Hyperthehedgehog
Not to be rude or be a jerk just wondering how come you can't do one story I'm just wondering
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Hyperthehedgehog
Me yes so just were do submit my character
Editamm it I meant yes I type fast Damm it me
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Hyperthehedgehog
I would recommend John in the story 1st and thanks
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on December 17, 2017
MaylatheGalacticWolf
Ok thanks I'll put one of your characters in the next then the others will be in other parts plus I will be working on a Full story of The Fighters
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on December 17, 2017
Hyperthehedgehog
Also my characters deaths are kinda brutal like falling from a high place and because John is made out of fire also he can't burn people but only when he wants to
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on December 17, 2017
Hyperthehedgehog
3/3
Name:hyper
Age:15
Note:can form into a wolf but only night and can't go back to hedgehog
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on December 17, 2017
Hyperthehedgehog
2/3
Name:John
Note:he's really nice but can hurt people really bad alps when he's mad his hair goes on fire and sometimes he doesn't talk can hack all my characters are boys also
Age:10
Likes:Jason and hypers jokes and puns his hype and Jason because there friends See More▼
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on December 17, 2017
Hyperthehedgehog
Here it goes
1st one
Name:Jason
Age:13
Likes:killing people (when in exe see the note) food when he makes people laugh slaps knee when makes a pun See More▼
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on December 17, 2017
MaylatheGalacticWolf
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on December 17, 2017
Hyperthehedgehog
Can I do only 3
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on December 17, 2017
MaylatheGalacticWolf
Well tell me your character name , age, powers, looks, likes and dislikes
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MaylatheGalacticWolf
Trust me, your not being a jerk or rude I for some reason put muitl parts but you want it to be one storyI will make it.
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Hyperthehedgehog
Got thanks also can you delete array seven comment for calling me a dick
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