The challenge Revived #20

The challenge Revived #20

RIP Hewkii and RIP Pred both had 3 votes as I wrote this episode. Guess they're equally loved.

published on August 2731 reads 6 readers 19 not completed
Chapter 1.

Random scene

Thomas: I just thought of the perfect plan.
Cyra: Ya
Thomas: Since no one can be recovered. We can kill other people to increase our chance of win.
Cyra: That's a fair point. Not that I agree with it, IN FACT. NO ONE SHOULD AGREE WITH IT.
Thomas: Well I'm doing it. Derp, come here.
Derp: Helloz
Cyra: You sure your going to do this.
Thomas: Yes. Derp, I'll give you $5 to stab a fork into this outlet.
Derp: Okayz
Tori: (grabs Derp) No Derp, think about it.
Derp: Hmmm...
Thomas: Your ruining my plan Tori.
Tori: What, to kill someone.
Derp: Hez going to killz me.
Thomas: ummm.....
Derp: Hez can't if I deadz alreadiez
Tori: WHAT DERP, DON'T....
Derp: (Stabs Fork into outlet)
(Derp and Tori get electrocuted)
Cyra: Can't believe your plan actually worked.
Thomas: 2 for 1. I like it.
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KoopaQueen
Tori mermaid 10/10 best part
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Jason_the_hedgehog
I hate you Thomas you killed my favorite characters
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King_of_Derps
It's only the beginning >: )
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DarkSpite_Spark56
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NetherWorks
Venus can burst into flames and lol. This one was funny
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King_of_Derps
I find the beginning with Derp good
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NetherWorks
Ok then
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NetherWorks
...
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King_of_Derps
@Starlight_the_crusader
No
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NetherWorks
Or
Docter: im afraid you have 1 year to live
Kid: oh ya? *shoots self*
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NetherWorks
Btw, did you get that from asdf movie 11?
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DarkSpite_Spark56
I like this one
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King_of_Derps
Me too.

It's the longest one. 6000+ characters
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DarkSpite_Spark56
@Derpyderpjuice true. poor Derp and Tori
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King_of_Derps
@FireSpark56
It's bfb taco
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King_of_Derps
@FireSpark56
Who going to listen to her though
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DarkSpite_Spark56
@Derpyderpjuice he is mean and even when Cyra try to tell the truth on who kill Derp and Tori,
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King_of_Derps
@FireSpark56
Thomas is so mean
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DarkSpite_Spark56
cool, poor Cyra though
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