Angels (A V-Hope Fanfiction)

Angels (A V-Hope Fanfiction)

"But why did you jump?" "Well, because..." "Why?" "Because...I wanted to fly again." There are the humans, the ones without deformities, that roam the skies, the ones we call 'angels'. There are the humans, the deformed ones, that roam the land and the Earth, the ones we call 'humans'. Then there are the ones in between. Punished for a crime he didn't mean to commit, former angel Kim Taehyung is banished from his world into the world of the deformities. He has lost his privilege, his home, his past life. He has one month to earn his privilege back. But there are others, others like him on the surface. Others that have committed greater crimes than he has. Other angels that couldn't earn their privilege back in time. Other angels that are bent with revenge.

published on September 14, 201666 reads 8 readers 12 not completed
Chapter 1.

Day Zero, Time Unknown

        "I'm sorry! Really!"
        No mercy. Absolutely none.
        "Please! Please–AHHH!"
        He pulled the panicked girl towards him. "I told you to never tell anyone."
        "But–I'm sorry!!"
        He straightened his arms and let go without another word.
        Sending the screaming girl down 10,000 feet towards certain death.

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        "The Council has decided."
        He looked down and closed his eyes. He knew what was coming.
        "Kim Taehyung, you have been found guilty of first degree murder for dropping an 18-year-old girl to her death. The consequence is the removal of your  privilege."
        He started, staring at the judge in shock. "What?"
        "You murdered an innocent. You cannot live with us–therefore, you will be exiled for a month. But if you are able to earn your privilege back within this month, you will be welcomed back."
        "What–no! That's unfair!" Taehyung felt the anger rising inside him and struggled to get past the guards, past the restraints.
        The judge stayed calm. "Kim Taehyung, do you acknowledge your murder?"
        He stilled and squeezed his eyes shut. "Yes."
        "What we're doing is fair and just. Do you object?"
        He felt the judges power, heard his call to stay quiet. He felt his own power to object trying to fight back. And suddenly, he couldn't speak.
        "No, you don't." He could almost hear the judge's smirk. "Case closed."
        And Taehyung felt the guards leading him away. Dimly felt it.
        Because he knew what was about to happen.

//AN: How is it so far? Is it okay? Is it not okay?
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TsumikiMiniwa
Update? Pleaaaase?
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SlugcatSeagullAghase
I'm writing the next two chapters now ^-^
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TsumikiMiniwa
Aw, I mean, it kinda probably is (unless my plot-twist sense is off, which it totally might be), but I hope the antagonist isn't Kookie. Kookie's too sweet to be evil. I bet Rapmon is a past fallen angel, though, from the way he was talking, or he knows the antagonist's secret and that the antagonist is evil. I don't believe he's the antagonist now, though.
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TsumikiMiniwa
Or I may be reading way too much into it, who knows?
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TsumikiMiniwa
You should continue this, it's really good! Also, the part that said, figure out who the three were, I immediately was like, "Well, Yoongi's the bitch that doesn't give a shit." XD
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SlugcatSeagullAghase
Ahaha, thanks! And I would continue it (I really want to) but...I don't know. I know how the story will end, but I don't know how to connect it to what's going on right now.
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TsumikiMiniwa
Ah, I see.
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lofoo
i dont ship it, but its good
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SlugcatSeagullAghase
Thank you!! ^^
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Aliyss
The story is good but a little bit confusing at the moment
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SlugcatSeagullAghase
That's the point XD
I'm trying to make it so the readers have to try to figure out what's going on.
But thank you!!
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SlugcatSeagullAghase
If you want to read more, I published a few more chapters that will hopefully clear everything up ^^
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