A Gamer's Wish

A Gamer's Wish

A Gamer's Wish is about a girl named Anna who has the oppertunity to play in a game that allows you to be in a game! She meets this one guy who helps her fight along the journey. They also meet other people who help in the bosses. And finally will they beat the game? They also go in the championships My Editor Elleyd- A Gamer's Wish is a fun, light-hearted story which makes up for a good comedy. With lots of detail on the literal video game world, gamers will sure enjoy the realness of this tail. Despite the shaky grammer and the overuse of Jeez, this is a playful story that is a good story to read when for something light but still interesting.

published on June 25, 2014223 reads 33 readers 53 completed
Chapter 1.
Inside Of A Game

Inside Of A Game

"And the new console is off! With excited gamers,nerds,and geeks! This new console has even brought  people who dont even like games!" The new reporter said. I rolled my eyes opening up the console. I opened this new game that the creator of innergames which was the name of the console and opened the sucker up! I put on the glasses looking around the place... This was my first time playing a game.. Or at least a rpg one.. This game in particular was about magic. "Jeez lets this start this thing as the game loaded i looked down to see my body. Then looked up at the loading screen and it said:
                                      WOULD YOU LIKE TO A ACCOUNT TO SAVE YOUR DATA?
Jeez seriosly? I pressed yes as a little menu popped up it said:
USERNAME:
PASSWORD:
EMAIL:
RE-TYPE PASSWORD:
AGREE TERMS OF SERVICES?
DONE
I typed in the information.. "Alright finally thats done..." I said then the loading screen popped up again but this time another menu popped up.. JEEZ! Are these menus going to ever stop? I logged in looking at the loading screen AGAIN! POP! It said as ANOTHER menu popped up and finally it was about the game! I looked at the classes you can pick
                      SWORDS MEN
                      ELEMENTAL MAGE
                      SHAPESHIFTER
                      BEAST TAMER
                      HEALER
                      BARD
                      SUPPORT
I hovered over the shapeshifter and beast tamer "jeez this is a hard descion" i said then i clicked beast tamer. Then the game said:
                                                  ARE YOU SURE YOU WANT TO PICK THIS PARTICULAR CLASS?
I touched yes.
PLOP! I looked around it seemed that i had been moved to a village i was guessing by the logo it was the hometown of beast tamers. A few users were walking around looking at their menus. I opened up my menu as it said
SKILLS
OPTIONS
APPEARENCE
LOG OUT
I looked at my appearence. "Hmm maybe i should change that" i said my appearence was a girl with blue hair, blue eyes, and had a a blue dress and a golden whip. I exited out the menu looking around the town.
AFTER A FEW HOURS..
"Jeez im getting hungry.." I said looking at a diner. "Wait.." I opened up my menu looking at the log out button. My finger hovered on it. "You know what i'm just gonna eat in the real world" i said i touched the menu button as i left the game.
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Comments (53)

Parabolic
odd way to end it....
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TheSmolKookieMonster
xD well im odd. And i couldnt really figure out what to do next because i dont have enough oc's.
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TheSmolKookieMonster
I will soon :3
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on September 05, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
You didn't use my OC
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on September 04, 2014
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on July 25, 2014
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on July 25, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Aw well ok
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on July 25, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
Write more soon!!!
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TheSmolKookieMonster
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on July 16, 2014
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on July 15, 2014
Parabolic
after playin a lot of MMOs with similar things, some of the info here seems a little...... what's the word..... ah! stale, and you restated some things multiple times, but from the sound of it you didn't seem to need help
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on July 14, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Cool
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TheSmolKookieMonster
:3
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on July 14, 2014
TheSmolKookieMonster
€ ô. u. ō )
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 14, 2014
TheSmolKookieMonster
After like 10 chapters we finally get the real story... XD
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on July 14, 2014
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Kisume
vixen wasnt suppost to know audren was her sister. but its still really awesome!!!
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TheSmolKookieMonster
XD i suppose that i got the oc's mixed up o_o but you did say that :|
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on July 14, 2014
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on July 13, 2014
Parabolic
how did you know her sister's name was Audren, she never told you
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Kisume
oh yaaaah...
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on July 13, 2014
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on July 13, 2014
TheSmolKookieMonster
Who wants me to make a gamers wish rp page?
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Parabolic
I'd join in it
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on July 13, 2014
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on July 12, 2014
TheSmolKookieMonster
100 READDDDDSSSSS!!! OMGGGG
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Kisume
update pleeeeease
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on July 09, 2014
CrystalDiamond2323
You should have just made an SAO fan fic... but still awesome! Write more
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Parabolic
that isn't SAO, it is her own version of it with a different games, different people, different VRMMORPG pieces, EVERYTHING IS DIFFERENT!!!!
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CrystalDiamond2323
I know it isn't SAo, but its similar
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on July 08, 2014
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Kisume
pick spirit!!! xD if it was the final boss, that means it is stronger and has more skill
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Parabolic
also, not many things would be resistant or immune to spirit damage in comparison to the others
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on July 07, 2014
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on July 07, 2014
Parabolic
you said 5 different dragons, but only listed four types
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TheSmolKookieMonster
xP i forgot spirit
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on July 07, 2014
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Aliyss
Plz wright more Otis so freaking awesome
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TheSmolKookieMonster
Sure!!! xP
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on July 07, 2014
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ZodiacAnimeFreak
Soooooooooopopooo ffffffffffffff*********cccccckkkkkkkkiiiiinnnnnnnnggggggggg aaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwssssssssssssoooooooooommmmmmmmmmeeeeeee!!
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TheSmolKookieMonster
Heehe why ty
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on July 03, 2014
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on July 03, 2014
Kisume
AWESOME! more please!
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TheSmolKookieMonster
Ty! And okay
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on June 30, 2014
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on June 30, 2014
MockingjayDistrict
Write more!
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on June 29, 2014
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on June 29, 2014
Parabolic
lots of jeez
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on June 29, 2014
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TheSmolKookieMonster
PLEASE RATE!!
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on June 28, 2014
ZodiacAnimeFreak
Awsome! Even though Chap 6 was short
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TheSmolKookieMonster
Oh and can you please rate :3
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TheSmolKookieMonster
Oh i'm still working on it
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on June 28, 2014
NeonTiger
so cool!
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on June 27, 2014
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Antechange
awesome
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TheSmolKookieMonster
i'm still working on it
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on June 25, 2014
Antechange
but so far it's awesome
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