The story of Domanic

The story of Domanic

You read the story of Sapphire right? Well, this is the story of Domanic! Hope you enjoy!

published on June 06, 2014176 reads 49 readers 55 not completed
Chapter 1.
Being a Black

Being a Black

I bet you all think I’m the bad guy right? And you are correct. But there are reasons behind why I am the bad guy, reasons why I joined Eggman. This is how it all started.

Sapphire starts in a family; you would accept the same from me? Wrong! My parents dumped me at the closest orphanage when I was a baby and I grew up there. The kids were mean to me and the adults there ignored me so I had to make my own way in life. The only person who actually knew I was not invisible was a boy named Joan. He was a red hedgehog who always wore a black waist coat. He was the same age as me. He used to sneak me chocolates from the goodie box and smile at me when the other kids picked on me. We never actually said anything to each other; we didn’t even know each other’s names at that point. One day he had gone missing from the orphanage. People searched everywhere for him but they could never find him.

It had been three days since he had been missing and I was sitting in my room, which was the size of a cupboard, and letting my figures twist and soar as white sparks of electricity flew from them and into the air. My power was my only entertainment.
“Cool power!” I looked up in shock to see Joan sitting on my window ledge smiling. I sat there dumbfounded.
“What’s the matter? You can’t talk?” He jumps off my window and sits next to me on the bed. I shake my head still shocked.
“How…why…People thought you was dead!?” I cry and he just chuckles.
“I am dead mate”
“So you’re a ghost?” I ask and he just gives me a chuckle.
“You’re a silly one aren’t you? No, I meant I’m dead here” He puts his hand on the left side of his chest.
“…Your ribs broken?” Joan starts laughing holding his chest. “Dude! You crack me up, but I guess I’m going to have to show you” He gets off of my bed and jumps out of the window. I slowly walk to the window and look down. Am I really going to follow the guy that was thought of as dead from my bedroom window? Heck yeah!

I follow him by jumping from my window. I land with wobbling or falling mover.
“Impressive!” I look up to see three birds and Joan.
“I’m Jet and this is Wave and Storm and you have already met Joan. We are the Blacks” I look at them all closely. Jet was a green hawk, Wace was a purple swallow and Storm was a grey albatross.
“And you want me because…?”
“We have seen your powers and it could help us with our next target.” Wave said
“Yeah! We want to burn down the orphanage!” Storm cried with a large smile. I knew it was wrong, I knew it could hurt people or worse, but I just couldn’t help it! It was like I was born to be evil!
“I’m in! What do I have to do!?”
“First you have to become a member of the blacks”
“How do I do that?”
“Here’s a riddle, what’s black+black+black+black?”
“…black?”
“You’re in!” Jet nodded towards me before walking off. Storm and Wave followed smiling at me. The Joan walked up to me
“Welcome to the club Domanic”
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Comments (55)

Mataways
This what bad(or not really) guys think: there the bad guy?
BULLIES ARE.
BULLIES ARE ACTUALLY MAKING PEOPLE REVENGE.
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sapphirethehedgehog
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on July 18
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on July 18
averageschoolgirl
or to the point when his parents dumped him:
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sapphirethehedgehog
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on July 09, 2015
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on July 09, 2015
averageschoolgirl
read to sentences: already feels sorry for domanic
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on July 09, 2015
sleepysuga
Nice story so far.
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sapphirethehedgehog
Thanks :3
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on June 16, 2015
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on June 15, 2015
Rainbow_Fluff
I thought the first chapter was called, Being Black XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
XD pfhhhhh
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on April 29, 2015
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on April 29, 2015
ELINAviolets
AWESOME story my friend (and Domanic)
... but does it continue of any sort or stop of lack of somthing?...
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sapphirethehedgehog
Honestly, theres not much left on this story. What happens to this is what I have already have on Sapphires story. So what happens is on there XD
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sapphirethehedgehog
X3 heehee
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on March 12, 2015
ELINAviolets
Hey sapph, got a surprise 4 u on my wall
It's gonna be SOO ADORABLE X)
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on March 12, 2015
sapphirethehedgehog
I wish I could, but to get a better ending I would have to re-write the whole story again but from Domanic point of view and I don't think it would be very intresting to read ther same story again. But we both kinda do. right now Sapph and Domanic are dating. Also thanks! ^-^
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on March 11, 2015
ELINAviolets
ok.. makes sense ^-^...
but because he has a "good" background and was and forever will be a big part in "your" life I thought he mayby would have a "better" ending (not like a happy ending but u know what I mean)...
It's just that I love ur stories and quizes so i thought he might get a further (or future) part in somthing...that's y i ask ^-^
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on March 11, 2015
Domanicthehedgehog
I look so cute when I'm little
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sapphirethehedgehog
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on October 23, 2014
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on October 23, 2014
MidnightRocks
I kinda feel bad for Domanic....
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sapphirethehedgehog
hmm...most people do now
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on July 31, 2014
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on July 30, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
I feel bad also..
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sapphirethehedgehog
Domanic and Luna sitting in a tree! K-I-S-S-I-N-G!
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on June 24, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
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on June 23, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Never thought I'd say this, but I feel sorry for Domanic.
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sapphirethehedgehog
Domanic: *smirks*
Sapphire: I do but...*looks at Domanic* I can't believe this is the same person!
Domanic: Believe it, don't worry Sapphire you will appear in my story soon
Sapphire: DX I'm scared!
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sapphirethehedgehog
Domanic: *falls*
Sapphire: *stops running and sighs* Thanks Jackie, I owe you
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on June 22, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Sonic: She's screwed.
Jackie: No she ain't! *takes out Dauntless gun, sets to tranquilliser mode, and shoots Domanic. All he'd feel was a replica of a real gun shot for a couple of minutes*
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on June 22, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Sapphire: *running from him* Don't record this! DX
Domanic: Saaapppphhhiiireee
Sapphire: Noooooo!
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on June 22, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Jackie: Domanic on peace serum! This is one for YouTube! *takes out phone and records Domanic on peace serum*
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on June 22, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Domanic: :3
Sapphire: Noooooo! *runs off*
Domanic: I know you want me!
Sapphire: Get lost! DX
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on June 22, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Sonic: Sapph, stay away from him! Peace serum is horrible to deal with!
Jackie: He's gonna wanna kiss you all over now!
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on June 22, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Domanic: *falls over*
Sapphire: Oh, hey, you alright? *helps him up*
Domanic: @.@ whoa...
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on June 22, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Jackie: Take that peace serum, derp!
Sonic: XD
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on June 22, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Sapphire: *Takes needle* ?
Domanic: No, don't you dare!
Sapphire: *giggles* Payback! *sticks needle in his arm*
Domanic: *starts feeling dizzy*
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on June 22, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Jackie: Put this in him Sapph. *hands Sapphire a syringe of peace serum*
Sonic: *whispers to Jackie* Let's see how stupid he looks on that! *smirks*
Jackie: *smirking with Sonic*
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on June 22, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Domanic:
Sapphire: Cooool it Dom!
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on June 22, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Sonic: Didn't Jackie tell you? Oh wait, you wouldn't understand it anyway.
Jackie: OHHH! High 5!
Sonic and Jackie: *high 5!*
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on June 22, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Domanic: Aw man! *sees Sonic* What are you doing here!?
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on June 22, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Sonic: She only felt sorry for you cuz she was in Amity mode.
Jackie: Dauntless mode, it's thrown out the window!
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on June 22, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Doanic: What happened to you feeling sorry for me? *puppy eyes*
Sapphire: -_-
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on June 22, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Jackie: XD Good one Sapphire! And as for this little thing Domanic... This is what you expect from a Dauntless gal!
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on June 22, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Domanic: O.O Whoa! Where did that come from!
Sapphire: XD Your face!
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on June 22, 2014
Lady_Artemis
Jackie: If that were me... *takes out a Dauntless gun* You dun mess with Dauntless!
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on June 08, 2014
Yamilettethehedgehog101
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on June 07, 2014
Alexishedgebat
If I tell Elise her bf was bad.....she's gonna kill me. Oh well. XD. At least he changed.
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on June 07, 2014
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on June 07, 2014
SwiftElementTheDarkHedgeWolf
This is getting good!
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on June 06, 2014
EmmaTheFox
Nice!
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on June 06, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
Thx and and he is only ilittle! So cute!
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on June 06, 2014
Fiendish_Heathen
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Lady_Artemis
Damn! He's in a club now! Right bad-ass eh? XD
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on June 06, 2014
SnakesVenomSans
Awesome so far
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