The challenge Make Believe #5C

The challenge Make Believe #5C

Hopefully I can finish it this part .If not. Guess a 4th part. Hehehe, this is so long

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Chapter 1.

More of the race

-Nameless
Jaz: This is so far.
Bluebird: What did you expect, this game is going to cause alot of pain.
Jaz: True.
Aiz-Lynn: Someone tell Kayla to stop giving me an evil look.
Phoenix: You did push her out.
Aiz-Lynn: So what
Kayla: SO WHAT!
Jaz: Can you guys stop fighting for 5 minutes.
Aiz-Lynn: No

-Evale
Miki: Oh crap. We hit the ocean. The van can't go any farther.
Angel: It could if we could fly.
Miki: What do you mean fly? Vans don't fly...
Angel: *presses button*
*car gets rockets on back*
Angel: HOLD ON!
Miki: Oh no...
Axis: Come on, keep it down. I'm still sle...
*car gets sent flying*

-Potatoes
Max: We're going to lose, we should just give up.
Kiri: That's quitter talk. And I am no quitter. We still got a chance. We can't give up yet.
BlueFirey: YEAH! But what should we do.
Haxed: *points at old building*
BlueFirey: Go in there?
Max: As long as we're still wasting f#cking time. Why not.

-Nameless
Jaz: WHAT IS THAT!
Bluebird: Freakin Team Evale passing us again.
Jaz: HOW! It's a van
Phoenix: Anyone have anything on them so we could stop them.
Kayla: I have this super strong magnet
Phoenix: I won't ask

-Evale
Akari: HAHAHA! Past them again.
Miki: FIRST PLACE HERE WE COME
Angel: WOOOO!
Axis: Has anyone seen Potatoes.
Angel: They're either way behind. Or way ahead.
Angel: Probably very behind.

-Potatoes
Max: This building is useless.
Sliver: Umm yeah Haxed, it's just full of metal. What good is that.
CrazyBob: SHINY METAL!
Haxed: *starts putting metal together*
Kiri: What's he doing.
BlueFirey: I don't know....we should probably start.
Max: We're just wasting our time. Lets go people.

-Nameless
Bluebird: Can't you speed this dang helicopter up.
Jaz: We're at max speed.
Bluebird: I DON'T CARE! GO FASTER!
Kayla: And we need to stop arguing.
Jaz: *gives Kayla a look*
Kayla: What?
Jaz: forget it

-Evale
Axis:Hey, I see land.
Angel: People, we're getting close.
Miki:That's good.
Angel: Welcome to Asia

-Potatoes
BlueFirey: What's going on? Why are we doing this.
Max: Wasting time, how great.
Haxed: *pulls phone out and starts texting*
Max:YOU IDIOT!  GET OF YOUR D#MN PHONE!

-Nameless
Jaz: I see land.
Phoenix: WONDERFUL!
Kayla: Ugh, Haxed texting me. He wants me to hold my powerful magnet up. Hang on. *stick magnet out of helicopter*
Aiz-Lynn: This is stupid

-Potatoes
Haxed: *grabs onto ball of metal*
Kiri: Guess we grab on too
*metal ball scoots*
Sliver: Oh I see...
Everyone but Max: *grabs on*
CrazyBob: MAX! Come on!
Max: *places one hand on*
*metal balls moves*
Haxed: *jumps*
Everyone: *jumps*
*metal ball flies out of building*

-Nameless
Bluebird: Put the magnet away.
Kayla: Why?
Bluebird: Maybe cause of the GAINT FREAKIN METAL BALL FLYING AT AS.
Kayla: Oh sh#t
*metal ball crashes into helicopter*
*Team Potatoes and Nameless land on shore*
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Derpyderpjuice
Getting closer
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