FEAR

FEAR

Don't read this if you're easily frightened. Don't read this if you have a phobia of something inside. Read if you want to scare the heck out of yourself. Then again, this might not even scare you, depending on what you're afraid of. Read at your own risk...

published on December 18, 201597 reads 51 readers 29 not completed
Chapter 1.
Dolls

Dolls

(True Story)

Once upon a time, there was a man. His name has been forgotten. We'll call him Baethan.
Baethan once had a good family, but they all thought that he was a little loopy. After awhile, he went to live on his own on a deserted island. His family found no problem with this and continued in their daily work.
One day, while he was doing whatever he did on that island, he saw a dead girl floating in the water nearby. In her arms was a doll. It was in bad shape, but it was still recognizable as a human baby doll.
Baethan fished the girl and her doll out of the water. He buried the girl, and he hung up the doll nearby as a memorial.
The next day, he saw another doll floating down the river. This one was missing its arm. He saw it as a sign, and he hung it up near the other doll.
Every day for the next several years, another doll floated past him on the river. Some were missing heads. Some had pitch black eyes or no eyes at all. Some were missing arms or legs or maimed in some other grotesque way. Some had wide, staring eyes and gaping mouths. Others had eyes squeezed shut and creepy smiles pasted on their faces.
The man slowly became obsessed with collecting dolls to hang up on his island. He went crazy, constantly looking for another doll. He eventually went back to his home to look for some. That was when his family found out.
When he died, his family moved in and changed it into a business, making money off of curious tourists who dared to explore the Island of the Dolls.
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Shingeki_No_Kyojin_Lover
Woah....I these stories!!!!!!!!!!!! XD Pweez make another one!
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WhiteRaven112
Not too bad, but wasn't really that scary. Make scarier ones!
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Lucky_Queen
Yeah, I know. I suck at writing scary stories, though! DX
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SweetPotatoKitty
'Make another one
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Lucky_Queen
Maybe.
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SweetPotatoKitty
Ok then
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SweetPotatoKitty
Ok nvm it's morning
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Lucky_Queen
Okie XD
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AnimatronicHeart
This frightens me so
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Lucky_Queen
Really?
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SweetPotatoKitty
The photos ;~;
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Lucky_Queen
Sorry DX
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INACTIVEINACTIVE_XxTheMadWolfxX_Is_now_me
*claps*
I already heard the first one, by the way XD
*totes doesn't stay up at night listening to creepypasta reading sometimes8
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Lucky_Queen
XD Thanks!
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Lucky_Queen
XD Thanks!
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INACTIVEINACTIVE_XxTheMadWolfxX_Is_now_me
NP.
but it is amazing XD
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ShyMusicGirl
Heh . . . *shaking.* You did a great job . . .
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Lucky_Queen
Thank you... *evil laugh* I'll be adding more soon.
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The_Rose_Gamer
Add clowns even tho I'm SUPER AFRIAD of them pls add it XD
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purplegiraffe
ya I'm terrified of clowns but i love getting scared!
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Marvel_Gleek
I looked at the ch.1 pic and got a heart attack...
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Lucky_Queen
Sorry..
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Marvel_Gleek
Chapter 2 is...bloody.
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on December 20, 2015
Marvel_Gleek
No, the story was okay thankfully it's only 2.54 (afternoon) and I'm with my cousins and family...
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purplegiraffe
same..
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DARK_PRINCESS_EMMA
These stories are great! Knives and Dolls!
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Lucky_Queen
Thanks! I'll be updating sometime soon!
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