the mirror of mysteries

the mirror of mysteries

a girl finds a magical mirror that leads her to an alternate universe were she is recruted to stop an evil wicth (it's not so good and it's my first story) part one i'm not done

published on June 13, 201520 reads 9 readers 7 not completed
Chapter 1.

chapter 1 violet

it is an ordinary day on the bus i was going to pick up my mom from the hospital when this guy came up to me.                                                                         ''hey'' he said                                                                                                                                                                                                                 ''hi''                                                                                                                                                                                                                               '' i'm broc''                                                                                                                                                                                                                    "i'm violet''
''cool''
''thanks''
thats when the bus pulled over and broc said''this is my stop'' then left,he was cute,i think i may have a crush no scratch that i do have a crush.

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at the hospital right now trying to find that broc on google plus, nothing, still nothing
i wonder if he was ever there or if he was just an illusion.
probibly the second one.whatever.
''violet?'' it was the nurse
''yes?''
''your mom will be out in a minute''
''ok''thats when i spotted a mirror on the ground i leaned over to pick it up to see if it belongs to someone that's when i saw it somewhere different in the reflection of the mirror what was it another world? i had no idea. i picked it up and i saw it again this is getting creepy,i drop it. i see a girl rushing her way out i go up to her ''do you know something about the mirror?''
''maybe''
''what do you know?''
''is that a bold eagle?"
''seriously i'm not going to..."
she just vanished.
that's when my mom came out
''honey they told me this was yours''
she said holding up the mirror.
wow she does'nt see the other world?
we got on the bus and i saw that girl
''hi'' i said
''oh hi''
''why did you run out?''
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Percyjackson13
it is a cool story
I liked it
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Dauntless_Demigod
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Dauntless_Demigod
sorry chapter one got messed up a bit
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Marvel_Gleek
No, I love the story!
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