The challenge Make Believe #5D

The challenge Make Believe #5D

Okay, here's the final part. It took forever. But it's finally here. Yay.

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Chapter 1.

The race ends

-Evale
Angel: There we go...welcome to the base of the mountain.
Miki: Now what
Angel: Now we climb to the top.
Axis: Can we just drive the van to the top. I really don't want to walk.
Miki:  I'm not sure you can drive a van up a mountain
Angel: This van can.
Miki: Why am I not surprised.

-Nameless Potatoes
CrazyBob: *gets up* Hey, everyone else is still asleep. I'll go on AHEAD! YAY!

-Evale
Akari: HAHAHA, I see the top.
Miki: Wonderful.
Angel: I'm going to speed up
Miki: How fast can this car go.
Angel: Super fast
Miki:I see that

-Potatoes
Haxed: *kicks max*
Max: *punches Haxed* WHAT!
Haxed: *points at sleeping team members*
*they wake everyone*
Sliver: We all here, now we walk away without waking up Team Nameless

-Evale
Angel: And we have reached the top.
Miki: YES! So we win the challenge.
Angel: Yes.
Axis: Oh it's cold. I'm going back to the van.
Akari: So we just wait for the other teams to get back here.
Angel: Guess so.

-Nameless
Jaz: *gets up* OH CRAP! EVERYONE GET UP!
Bluebird: What?
Jaz: POTATOES ARE ALREADY GONE! BACK INTO THE HELICOPTER!
Phoenix: Hopefully it still works
Jaz: IT DOES!
Phoenix: That's amazing.

-Potatoes
Sliver: Hold up....1 2 3 4 5... we're missing someone.
Max: Oh great. Who.
Sliver: CrazyBob.
Max: Of course.
Kiri: Well we need to find him.
BlueFirey: But where would he be.
CrazyBob: HELLO GUYS!
Max: *punches CrazyBob* B#tch don't scare me.
CrazyBob: SoRrY
Kiri: Here's everest. Guess we start climbing.

-Nameless
Jaz: And there's the end.
Phoenix: No sign of Potatoes any where. YES!
Bluebird: We made it?
Miki: Guess we just wait for Potatoes to get here.
Kayla: So does this mean Team Potatoes loses, and where's Ryan. I thought he would be here.
Ryan: Hey guys. Good job but....
Akari: But WHAT!
Ryan: This isn't the tip of mount Everest.
Bluebird: What do you mean. YES IT IS!
Ryan: *points at even bigger mountain next to them* up there. Have fun.
Jaz: Alright, back in the helicopter.
Miki: *pushes Aiz-Lynn down the mountain*
Angel: NOW BACK IN THE VAN! WE NEED TO GET GOING!
Jaz: Wait here, I'll get Aiz-Lynn. Then we'll fly to the end.
Bluebird: Well hurry.

-Potatoes
BlueFirey: Haha, they went up the wrong mountain.
Kiri: That's good for us.
Sliver: Very good.
Kiri: Now we're the team in first. This is wonderful.
*van flys past them quickly*
Max: WHAT THE F#CK WAS THAT!

-Evale
Akari: Hahaha losers.
Angel: We're here.
Axis: We won? Yay...
Ryan: You did, unfortunately.
Miki: UNFORTUNATELY! WHAT DOES THAT MEAN!
Ryan: Oh crap, you weren't supposed to hear that.

-Nameless
Jaz: AIZ-LYNN,  GET IN!
Aiz-Lynn: *gets in*
*flys back up*
Bluebird: Finally back
Jaz: No time.
*flys up to everest*

-Potatoes
Max: I don't think so... *shoots helicopter down*
*team Potatoes jumps to top*
Sliver: We won, we won, we won.
Miki: Technically, you placed 2nd. Us, Team Evale, like expected got first.
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King_of_Derps
Voting done
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provoked.tater
Max is kinda a 10 year old edgelord
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Aiz-Lynn
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Phoenix
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Bluebird
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Kayla
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King_of_Derps
Finally done
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