One Month

One Month

Rachel a former boarding school student is given One month to become Archer a hero. Before her parents are killed.

published on June 2739 reads 13 readers 11 completed
Chapter 1.

Chapter 1

  School started and Rachel headed to her first class, History. It was her favorite class because she learned more about where she came from. After first block she went to her next one and the rest until the day was over. After Rachel got back to her dorm she called her best friend "How's your first day of Boarding School?" Her friend Willow asked.

"It's ok." Rachel replied

"I heard famous people went there including your favorite Ryan Storm!!"

"REALLY!?" Rachel screamed and glee sending her neighbor in, who had braces and held a crowbar. "Sorry Tahni I seemed to have gotten a little over excited." Rachel said.

"You sure it wasn't a spider?" Tahni asked.

"Yeah I'm sure." Tahni left, and Willow hung up so Rachel decided to get started on her homework. Honara Wolf Boarding School is where talented people went to school before they became famous just like their parents, only Rachel's parents weren't famous. They were rich sure, but not famous. Rachel's parents were Amber and Kyle Woods, young and beautiful they're in their 40's and when Rachel was born her mother was 29 already married to the person who chose her. Kyle Frost ended up taking Amber's last name because it sounded better.

After 3 hours of scheduled homework she called her parents, one ring, two rings, three rings "Hello?" Her mother answered,

"Mom?" Rachel said

"Yes darling?"

"How are things going in New York?"

"Well the fashion show is amazing if that's what you mean."

"That's great, in 17 days we're gonna have parents day."

"Yeah I know, we'll be there tell Chase I said hi." Her mom hung up, just like always. Chase was her younger sister she's 8. Done with her homework Rachel turned on the T.V and started to watch The Avengers.

  "I like Thor." Mae came in and sat down,

  "I like Clint."

  "You mean Mr.Bow and Arrow."

  "Yeah." They laughed a bit, after the movie finished both girls went to bed until the next morning.
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ACupOfTaeTwoSugaCubesAndAKookie
(I like this story, but sometimes it's kind of confusing and hard to read. If you work on that a little, this story would be absolutely amazing. Also, I feel like you tend to assume that your readers know the characters. Being someone who tends to forget story plots, I'm having trouble figuring out different characters and their abilities.
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Wolfhumanlover
Oh I'm sorry i should explain more
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Wolfhumanlover
I forgot if you take my character from one month quiz the personalities describe the person and it explains the characters (I will be making a new One Month Quiz as well
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Wolfhumanlover
Prologue is done not chapter 1
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ACupOfTaeTwoSugaCubesAndAKookie
(It is? Awesome! If I get time to read it, then I will read it today!!!)
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Wolfhumanlover
Thanks Bows and Knives is coming out today
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ACupOfTaeTwoSugaCubesAndAKookie
(Yup, and you should try and stretch the plot. I feel like everything happens too quickly.
I just finished the story, and I absolutely loved the ending!!)
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Crazy_fangirl_of_Harley_Quinn
OMG this is freaking amazing! You should seriously write the second story
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Wolfhumanlover
Thx
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