The Strange town

A Kid lost in the desert for a reason they don't even know, finds himself in a town that's to good to be true.

published on August 17, 20155 reads 4 readers 11 completed

The Strange town

I walked thru the desert for weeks
It was anyone's guess how I was still alive,
I'm just a kid and yet I'm still alive in these conditions
I was weak starving thirsty
I can't even remember why I was out here
The Girl!
Yes I remember seeing a girl...
I dropped to my hands and knees, I looked left and right with no sign of civilization anywhere.

I began to drift off peacfully but as I continued looking right, I noticed a shadowy figure
"I'm saved" I tried to say but was too weak to talk, and then blackness.

(2 days Later)

I woke up on a bed in an old abandoned house.
I looked outside the window to see where exactly I was, It was beautiful
Plants, Trees, Happy people.
It was like I was in heaven, but why was this room the only thing grey in this entire place?
oh well I guess it didn't matter.

I got out of my bed and ran outside
I walked thru the streets everyone looked so happy as I passed by
it was almost like a dream.

I looked up to see a giant towner in the center of town.
for some reason I could feel myself being draw to it like a moth to a flame.
I walked and walked completly ignoring my surroundings.

As I got closer to the tower I could feel a strange heat
when I got inside I saw the girl from before
"Good you're awake!" she said with a big smile on her face
"Yeah, I remember you" I said
"so this is the Kid you've been telling me about" I see and Older man in a red and Black robe."Do you like my town?" He asked

"Yes it's beautiful" I awnsered "Do you want to stay here?" he asked
"what about my parents" I asked
"Oh they're close by I promise" he said "Everyone's just waiting for your awnser"

He lent out his hand for a hand shake
"Okay" I said shaking his hand
he suddenly had a devilish smile on his face
and the world began to turn grey and dead
even the old man turned to nothing but bones and ash.

The girl was the only thing to stay in color
"Ah you fell for it!" she happily just in the air "I've been trapped here for thousands of years and now you agreed to switch places!"

"No I didn't" I argued
"You agreed to stay" she said
"wait he said my parents are near by!" I yelled
"That wasn't a lie, don't you remember me" she said
I tried very hard to remember exactly where I saw this familiar girl with no success.
and then suddenly the room turned black again.

I suddenly see normal looking people in a gallery
"This is the last thing that remaind of the Great town of Gozia" I heard a man
I suddenly see my parents along with that girl
"what happened to the town?" my dad asked
"No one knows," said the guide "but this statue of a kid who was in the rubble centries ago, which is now just a never ending desert"
"Mom this statue is scaring me can we go see something else?" the girl said
"sure thing sweetie" my mom said as they followed the guide
The girl turned around and waved goodbye to me
I suddenly remember where she was from, she was the statue in the Gallery
except that is now me.
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Fej123
Ok before I read the story I, it's through not thru.
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Fej123
Quite a good story actually
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on March 06
RpgGamer
I was Lazy when I wrote it
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Fej123
Ha
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Qmind91
Hello again! It's me qmind again! It's just that I've forgot the password for my old profile. But now I have created 2 stories on my new profile and one story on the old one if you would be interested in reading them. ^^
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on August 25, 2015
qmind
Great story! :-) The very first story I have been reading on qfeast actually ^^
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RpgGamer
Really? Thank you
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RpgGamer
@qmind hope you enjoy the one you're reading next.
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on August 17, 2015
qmind
Thanks! I´m glad hearing that, I think I might have the time for reading that long story now ^^
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on August 17, 2015
RpgGamer
@qmind still I'm glad you enjoyed it
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on August 17, 2015
qmind
Yes, thats true! :-) I was checking one story before but it looked like being too long for me at the time so I leaved it unfinnished ^^ I didn´t even start reading it so that doesen´t count but your story does! ^^
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