A Broken Soul

A Broken Soul

A story about you, a human walking through the depths of a snowy forest until you find something...interesting

published on June 03, 201721 reads 11 readers 3 not completed
Chapter 1.

Your Journey Begins

You are a human who works at a factory and keeps getting hurt all the time, accused for being 'Lazy' so you decide to run away into the snowy forest, who knows what you could find in there.....who knows if you could get hurt, and so you decide to stop wondering and just run straight through the trees and run through the snow, ignoring the fact your bare feet are almost frozen to death, you soon stop and lay beneath a tree and think about what you should do, you think about one thing you never got....Food, you look around at the trees to see any sight of food.... there was none, but you then start getting sticks and start

building a hut, it's not your best work but you rest in it anyway....you feel as if you were going to drift off to sleep
and so you do, finding yourself in the Same stick hut you built, you go outside and to your surprise there was a dead leaf with berries on it, it seems that someone-Or something put it there intentionally for you to eat and so you start eating them and they were way better than the old bread in the factory....but you then feel curious to who or what left it there, you never heard anything while you were sleeping so they must've been very stealthy or very small, you try to call out but your voice couldn't come out and so you decide to just explore a bit around the forest to see if there were any caves, creatures or anything else so you start walking deeper into the snowy forest, it gets more cold the more you walk as if the wind hated you, you soon hear howling and decide to turn back but it's so foggy you can't see a thing but you walk back anyway, hoping not to get eaten alive by wolves or something else more monstrous, luckily you soon reach you stick hut and hide in it still hoping to see another day pass by as you slowly...fall....alseep.....soon you feel warmth, confused by this you wake up finding Wolf skin on you like a blanket and unlike the ones in the factory, there was no blood or gore on it just Wolves Skin, you feel happy and thankful for who gave you it and you then see another dead leaf and berries that you eat in seconds feeling more alive, You then walk out and see something in the snow....you decide to walk towards it, it looks brown and is sneezing hard and looks like a Dog....you decide to pick up the poor creature and take it back to your hut, resting it in the Wolf skin....Soon, it starts to awake and shows it blue eyes and starts to sneeze and sniffle as it gets up, its like a husky...but....more scary...
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sapphirethehedgehog
I’m loving the fact it’s in 2nd person! It’s hard to find stories like that! Also whoever’s feeding me must constantly be watching so they’re close...
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sapphirethehedgehog
Please do! :0
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on January 05
EmilyTehPancake
Thanks! I'm actually quite good at making 2nd person stories. I might make more when I'm bothered to :3
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