Jesse Durwood Got Hit By A Car And All I Did Was Watch, I Swear

Jesse Durwood Got Hit By A Car And All I Did Was Watch, I Swear

One rainy night, Jesse Durwood was out walking. It seemed like nothing bad ever happened to her. She knew the road like the back of her hand. One slight complication on the way home, though... She was killed. Her killer is on the loose. How did this happen? Why? No one knows. I have an even bigger problem, though - I saw. I don't know who did it, but I saw. And I might be next.

published on March 28245 reads 30 readers 21 not completed
Chapter 1.

Prologue - Jesse Durwood

Jesse Durwood was someone who always had the whitest teeth in the yearbooks, someone who fit into that dress that was a size too small for you even though you were already a size zero, the girl who stole your boyfriend's heart in the 9th grade. She was the hippest, trendiest, most happening, most popular girl at Hills High. Unfortunately, she had many enemies. That was probably what got her killed.

Jesse was alone that night, just dumped by her boyfriend and best friend. An all time low, if you may. It was raining heavily - she felt like she had to pee. Her boyfriend and her's words played in her head over and over. 'Just go die! We're over!' 'Fine, maybe I will!'

She wondered - maybe things could have gone differently? She'd never know...

Why?

Because that was the day she died.
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kokojongin
AJHJDJSJ HOE
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on July 29
kokojongin
HOEE
UPDATE
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Helpless
I'M IN THE PROCESS OF WRITING
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kokojongin
DUDE
this is awesome
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Helpless
Awe, thanks~
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TylerWay
Chapter 10 left off with suspense! @Shimo
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Helpless
hA
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Helpless
Thanks~
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on April 27
TylerWay
it was great
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TylerWay
Damn. This is so amazing! This story caught me. You are a really good writer.
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Helpless
Thank you!
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SlugcatSeagullAghase
This is really good so far!
However.
I wish you could make the chapters somewhat longer.
Also, are you planning on introducing more characters? This book could be a fun "find the bad guy" kind of book.
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Helpless
The chapters will gradually get longer, I promise. I will introduce others, yes.
And thank you. :3
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SlugcatSeagullAghase
No problem!!
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THE.GREAT.PAPYRUS.and.sans
Please
Do not tell me this is true 0-0
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Helpless
Of course not!
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THE.GREAT.PAPYRUS.and.sans
You're welcome!
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Helpless
Thank you!
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on March 31
THE.GREAT.PAPYRUS.and.sans
Definitely!
It's not over
But yes!
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Helpless
Was the story good tho? :0
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THE.GREAT.PAPYRUS.and.sans
OH THANK GOD
OH GEEZE
OH WOW
I THOUGHT IT WAS AND I WAS LIKE-
"WOOOAH. THIS PERSON'S LIFE'S ABOUT TO BE FÜCKED UP"
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