Barkstar's Broken Tale

Barkstar's Broken Tale

Barkstar wasn’t always evil. She once had a kind heart, but something happened to change that. What made her change? Why did it make her change? Barkstar once Barkkit had a broken tale, always said to her in her sleep.

published on February 1816 reads 6 readers 4 not completed
Chapter 1.

Prologue

“Look at them, Blackheart. Aren't they precious?” Graytail, a black she-cat with a gray tail. Said.
“Very beautiful kits.” Blackheart, a brown tom spoke.
The brown she-cat tussles a bit and made a hissing noise getting claws out.
“Fiesty one, like me,” Blackheart spoke. “Barkkit should be her name.”
“And the black one should be Shadowkit. “ Graytail purred.
Soon enough Blackheart left to the warriors' den and laid to rest and Graytail drifted to sleep, but she woke and could not sleep for her dream was a nightmare prophecy, about Barkkit.
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gnocchi
good story, but here's some advice: if you're going for a good prefix, don't use something like 'mysterious'. it isn't very convincing, especially when it's mysteriousstar. she's a brown cat, so maybe something like bracken or russet? hell, even mystery would be ok. prefixes that end in -s or are just long are very uncommon.
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Pj_The_Doll
I know, but this clan is a little different. In detail she becomes more mysterious as time goes on and more hateful and dark. Mysteriousstar when younger sees something and it kills her. Making her more mysterious.
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Pj_The_Doll
I will think about changing it. I think I will change it too
brownkit or maybe even Dirtkit or Barkkit
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gnocchi
so maybe she could've started off with a different prefix, but the clan started calling her by that because she started getting more antisocial? bc there was no way for blackheart and graytail to know any of that when they named her.
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