Little Worlds (Sample)

Little Worlds (Sample)

Hey everyone, as you know I'm making a story and here's just a little preview of it, hope you like it! Characters used: Max (my character) Karina Gauntlet (not my character) Hope you like it! x2

published on January 27, 20157 reads 6 readers 1 completed
(After) The Fall.

(After) The Fall.

"I what?!" Asked Max, confused by what the pretty lady before him had said.
"You fell... From the sky!" Cried the lady, pointing up. "I believe the only reason you survived the fall was from the trees. Catching you..."
"More like smashing into me..." Max said as he rubs his sore and painful back. "Ow..." Max was sad again.
"Um... Are you not surprised from falling... OUT OF THE SKY!?!?!" She yelled at him, surprised by his calmness.
"Sorry, I... I don't know, I just don't feel surprised for some reason" Max said. Max always knew he was a calmed guy but even he was surprised by the calmness to his fall, almost getting kill!
The lady face palmed, confused as Max just started to take in his surroundings. A forest, a lake, a cool looking tree house and this pretty lady. Max thought about the lady.
"Um... What just happens to be your name?" Max asked the lady.
"Karina Gauntlet." Said Karina, looking at Max. "And yours?"
"Max..." Said Max, offering a handshake, getting up from the ground he had been sitting on.
Karina shook his hand, not knowing this was the beginning of an adventure. "Nice to meet you Max."
"Thanks" said Max, smiling for his new found friend. "So, what do you like to do in your free tim-?"

Just then something exploded, sending the two new friends flying backwards, officially starting their journey. Were they'll have to face challenges, meet new friends, save the world, and try to make this seem like NOT a romance. Seriously... This will not be a romance... If you only like romances then leave... Leave now... You don't have to but if you do read this and you only like romances then you unable to hate this... I mean you can hate it all you want but seriously, don't post comments of how sucky and how there was no romance in it... Fine, I'll add a little romance, hopefully enough to to keep you happy...

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Also sorry guys that this isn't that long, I don't have enough characters yet, seriously, I only had one character in here. Thanks btw. Hope you guys like it, it may not be long, but it's all for YOU! Yes you, the one reading this... Oh, and you the person reading this over the reader's shoulder. Oh and you, person in the background... All of you...

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Also, sorry I keep having to ramble on and stuff (sorry the limit is kinda pushing me to have to ramble on) but I just wanted to say that I would love as many reviews as I can get from this. Tell me if you liked it, loved it, hated it, was disgusted by it, wanted to take it on a date, wanted to marry it, wanted to travel to another world with it, or whatever. Love you guys in an awkward friends type deal! Peace!

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on January 28, 2015