(Be honest) Which would you rather read if they were side by side on a library shelf? (updated)

(Be honest) Which would you rather read if they were side by side on a library shelf? (updated)

I redid this cuz some people said it didn't have enough description. So, redone! Same thing, gimme ur opinion, PLEASE comment! it'll only take a second. Just tell me which one, and why.

published on November 08, 20157 reads 5 readers 17 completed

The options

I have a huge problem. I want to become a published author  (I don't care about the whole online writing movement; I want my stuff in print.  but I can only work on one. :|

I have two ideas: The Fabulous FAB and Blue Flame.

Four Asian Boys and Evelyn

This is about four Asian boys and a Persian-polish girl and the absurd adventures they have in the past, present and future. It's a story collection, with multiple stories in one book. There's a bit of drama but mainly it's comedic. It takes place in a really weird high school, with a mean girl and everything. It's a bit counterculture in many ways and I attack annoying popular stereotypes. And the four boys DO NOT chase after the one girl! Only one gets the girl and everyone else is fine with that.
It's genre is comedy.

Blue Flame Synopsis

This story is a fantasy-romance story about a thug from the notorious Warriors of the Woods gang who saves the life of the girl he kidnapped and the drama that ensues afterwards. It's pretty dramatically violent. It can get really sad at some parts, and there's a weasel. The girl is not ditzy and she's not blonde. And two of the characters are Asian, though their names don't suggest that.
It's a novella. It's genres is Drama and Romance.

Okay. So. Now. your turn. if you saw these side by side on a library shelf, which would you rather read? Be honest.

(I need to have 2000 characters for this to public...so I'm buying space....)

Also, if I have two questions.
I have a story about the mean girl and the main character that the girl likes. my sister wants the mean girl to NOT like him for reals, but I want her to. What do you think?
Like or no like?
Another one is, my other main character had a little sister who dies. How old should she be? my Sister wants under 6 months, I want over 6 months.
under 6 or over 6?

Okay. So! You're turn. PLEASE COMMENT! tell me which one and why. I'd really appreciate it. Once I posted a story and got like zero reads and zero comments and that's painful. So please COMMENT.
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Comments (17)

Lucky_Queen
If I saw them side by side on a shelf, the first thing that I'd choose would be based off of the cover design and title. Out of titles, I'd definitely choose Blue Flame. I can just see an epic cover for that. If I actually looked at the synopsises for both, I'd probably get both. If I HAD to choose, I'd probably go with Blue Flame.
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girly43
Ok! I was thinking of Blue Flame having a black cover with a guy holding a blue candle with a blue flame up to his eyes. So his eyes are glowing...or is that lame?
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girly43
omg I just realized! sorry for weirding you out, I realized I mixed you up with my other friend @RogueKitty XD sorry!
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on December 16, 2015
girly43
aw darn. I don't think i'll go self-publish.
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on December 11, 2015
Lucky_Queen
Um sure... Although usually, especially if you're not going the self-publishing route, you might not get to choose your cover.
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on December 11, 2015
girly43
do u think once I publish it that should be the cover?
(another cool aspect is that the male protagonist is Asian so you will have glowing ASIAN eyes!)
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on December 11, 2015
Lucky_Queen
It's definitely not.
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on December 11, 2015
girly43
thank you!!! I thought it would be lame. XD
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on December 11, 2015
Lucky_Queen
OMG PERFECT

I was thinking more of a sci-fi looking cover with a basic blue flame blowing across the side and front of the book but your idea is way cooler.
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on December 01, 2015
Marvel_Gleek
I would read the fantasy book with less drama, romance, and sad parts.
I think under 6 months will be better (if she's over 6 months old, I think the book will be quite sad). Also, liking him for real might be better because if she doesn't like him for real, the story may become awkward.
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girly43
true, yeah. that's what I thought too. I'll make her like him for real.
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girly43
Yeah. but she's a bit of a mean girl. :/ but i'll still make her like him for real.
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on November 26, 2015
Marvel_Gleek
That would be wonderful!
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on November 26, 2015
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on November 24, 2015
neefflove
I would rather read the fantasy.
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girly43
hmm...okay! thanks
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girly43
it means a lot to me
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on November 08, 2015
neefflove
No problem!
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