The story I wrote in class...

So I wrote this in class and I though that it would be nice to send it on qfeast so here ya go I'm lazy to write this

published on October 0613 reads 8 readers 5 completed
Chapter 1.

I WROTE IT IN CLASS

In Oslo,Norway May 15th 2016 Aksel Bondevik-Kirkland was a ordinary normal 14 year old boy with light golden hair, dark baby blue eyes that looks frightening, but he wasn’t scary. He had pale white skin that resembled a vampire but of course he’s not a vampire. He attended World Academy Middle School for sons and daughters of the wealthy that came from different countries,continents,and states,or even territories!

Aksel was really proud and happy until his annoying little cousin Kristen the Icelandic-Cantonese girl from Asia and captain of the cooking club ran up to Aksel and ruined his peace the little girl also had brown hair with a touch of white in the hair,purple eyes,and light tan skin. She wanted him so she yelled, “BIG BROTHER AKSEL AKSEL!!!” Kristen jumped on Aksel. “W-What is it? Are we still playing that family game I requested to stop?” Aksel is very moody when someone ruins his peace and Kristen knew this. “Yeah, I know,” She yelled,  “but b-but I STARTED A RUMOR THAT THERE’S MONSTERS IN AN ABANDONED SCHOOL DOWN BY AN ABANDONED RAILROAD  YARD, AND I WANT YOU TO CHECK AND SEE IF IT’S REAL!!!!” Kristen yelled at Aksel “.....Who did you hear this from..?” Aksel raised an eyebrow as Kristen looked at the ground “Landon...Landon my twin brother told me-” RING The bell rung for school “I’ll ask Bjarke and Valter if they can come with me and go to this Bleeping school when they’re done with their activities…” Kristen hugged Aksel “Thank you Aksel...Thank you…” Aksel nodded and headed to his classroom


  Then, on a dark night it was raining and thunder happening and it was exactly 7:00 PM “Oh my God, this is going to be so Bleeping exciting!!” Bjarke Kohler exclaimed as Valter Väinämöinen-Oxenstierna  rolled his eye’s and kicked Bjarke foot “Ow!! Valter! It hurts” Aksel just stared at the house that’s filled with spider web’s  and Bjarke hopping up and down trying to massage his foot “Good….I’m happy that it hurts you” Aksel chuckled as he walked inside the creepy mansion. “Hey!! Aksel! Wait for me!” Bjarke climbed on top of Valter’s back,  like Valter is going to give him a piggy back ride as Valter sighed and followed Aksel in the house with Bjarke on his back.

“M-Maybe we should forget about this….” Bjarke was shivering and Aksel slapped Bjarke “NO! WE ARE DOING THIS MISSION OUR LITTLE COUSIN KRISTEN ASKED US!!!” Aksel lectured Bjarke “Right! As the oldest I am going to be the leader! Now….Bjarke you stay with me I can’t trust you by yourself….” Valter looked at Aksel “I trust you to go on your own since you have your imaginary friend Ms.Troll and your magical powers….Your parents are known for their magic powers from one simple wand “Okay……” Aksel nodded as Valter, Bjarke, and Aksel went to there destinations

        Aksel went up the curved stairs and heard click clack noises and saw a door with blood on it and Ms.Troll popped out. Yes she was a troll with dark green skin, a short long nose, white hair, a Purple apron, and a light green dress, she also had a purple night hat, brown eyes but unfortunately she had no shoes “Take out your wand-” Ms.Troll’s sentence cuted as a fade voice said “No! Don’t take it of OR ELSE”

Aksel took out his wand and ignored the fade voice as it disappeared and Aksel opened the door and saw blood all over the walls and floor. Someone must’ve been killed in here….No a lot of people might have died on here Aksel thought as he saw a cage with a bloody towel on it and had a note on it Aksel was puzzled and he walked over to the note that was taped on the towel saying in thick words “DO NOT TOUCH” Aksel laughed and thought it was silly

        
        Aksel opened the cage and saw a girl on strings playing tunes that were crackling and creaking unsatisfying noises and rocked her head back and forth to one shoulder to another shoulder but the puppets voice was beautiful and it was recorded from a tape. Aksel smiled and listened to the singing that was recorded in a tape. A few minutes later the puppet stopped singing and broke down this made Aksel yelp in surprise. Upstairs a puppeteer who goes by the name “Alfie” walked down the stairs with another tape recorder and went in the room Aksel was in and saw that the little puppet’s head was gone. Alfie whimpered but then he realized he can buy a new one...If he had any more money left “W-Who are you?” Aksel’s eyes widen

        
Alfie laughed and took out his hat showing his wrinkly face and white hair with a voice of a old man “Ahahaha! You don’t remember me Aksel? I’m the amazing ultra puppeteer!” Aksel smiled really big “you're the puppeteer I loved when I was younger?! I had all of your CDs and tapes!” Alfie laughed “I really miss my days of a puppeteer but sadly I retired….” Aksel flicked an eyebrow “You retired..? But why? And why were you in this dark mansion?”

Alfie sighed and patted Aksel’s head “Kiddo you have a lot of questions don’t you? I lived in this mansion after my disappearance because I felt so heartbroken that my daughter died in a car crash and she was the reason my puppeteer career came so alive…” Alfie touched his heart “I feel like if I retire I can feel happy again...I haven’t been happy these past years after her death. Aksel you remind me of my daughter and before you ask me who’s the puppet’s voice in the cage it’s my daughters. Aksel smiled “Your daughter has a wonderful voice…” Alfie smiled as well “Thank you….and I want you to take your friends home” Alfie pointed at Bjarke and Valter who were soundly asleep “I won’t forget you Alfie and your puppets. Alfie nodded as he gave Aksel to hold Bjarke and Valter

The next day it was May 16th 2016, Kristen screamed again “BIG BROTHER AKSEL AKSEL!!” Aksel sighed will that girl ever give up? “Yes Kristen?” Kristen panted “where were you!! Uncle Lukas and Auntie Alice were worried about you big brother!” Aksel smiled and Kristen gasped “OH MY GOD!! AKSEL DO YOU HAVE A GIRLFRIEND ALREADY?!” Aksel hissed “What?! No!” Aksel started to chase Kristen “BIG BROTHER AKSEL HAS A GIRLFRIEND BIG BROTHER AKSEL HAS A GIRLFRIEND!!”  Aksel yelled “HEY CUT IT OUT!!

In the corner by the bush Alfie smiled looking at Kristen chasing Aksel “Kids never change do they Ms.Troll?” the puppeteer took off his mask and it revealed Akel’s father!! Lukas Bondevik! As Ms.Troll smiled “Yes they never change” Ms.Troll sipped her black tea that’s brewed “And that’s the best thing about kids...they never change” Ms.Troll and Lukas laughed. Ms.Troll looked at Lukas “And what was even the blood on the walls?” Lukas mumbled “That wasn’t Blood that was paint to make it look fascinating and scary” Lukas exclaimed “Oh...Alright then” Ms. Troll said. “But why did you made the house all scary? And filled with fake blood?” Ms. Troll exclaimed. “I thought that if I covered the house looking scary and actually well perhaps cover the house and start that rumor there’s ghosts and other myth creatures maybe I won’t be popular anymore? Alice would get angry at me for not paying attention to our now growing family and since I have another baby on the way maybe i’ll pay attention to our family instead of fame.”

    Lukas laughed a little until he heard a certain femine british accent with golden yellow pig tails,light green eyes with glasses,and light skin. The british women was wearing a certian blue dress. “Hey!! I can hear you!” Alice Kirkland. The biological mother of Aksel “Oh…..Hello sweetie~ You do remember our anniversary is tommarow right? It’s the 16th of May my sweet little tea cake. It’s also my birthday that day~” Alice was blushing at the nickname “Sweet little Tea Cake” Lukas used on her when they got married and when the two decided it’s time to be a couple “HEY!! YOU ONE BIG MEANIE!! Y-YOU DUMMY!! I TOLD YOU NOT CALL ME THAT NICKNME ANY MORE!” Yes, Alice was a tusendere to her own husband but she loved him more then she can ever ask “But you blush and get so angry about it that it’s cute~” Lukas kissed his wife’s forehead “Y-You idiot!” Alice was blushing really red “I love you too~ Tea cake” Lukas laughed. Alice was shocked “HEY!”
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Hnnn...I never really liked this story but...
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L.o.l LOL ❤️ Love it!!
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