A New World (a CYOA)

This is my second cyoa, my first being Illusion. More will be explained in the first chapter, constructive criticism is welcome, I may or may not accept ocs or at least base some characters on ocs that I find interesting but until then,I hope you enjoy -cover photo coming soon-

published on November 06, 201418 reads 11 readers 10 not completed
Chapter 1.

Prologue : The Beginning part 1

So the way this CYOA works is that you will find options which you will vote in the comments, to prevent comments being repeated, you can just thumbs up an answer. When I want to update I will check the comments and the one with the most votes wins. You have two main types of options. Pre-set ones and free will. Free will means you decide what happens. Note that there isn't always a free will choice. What you do may affect future options. This will be divided into arcs, At the end of each arc you can choose your reward. I won't reveal too much except that this will have shape shifters, elves and more as this is set in a fantasy world. So with that said, Lets start. Oh and yes it is possible to die. If you fail(as in die) your rewards may be changed or you have to start the whole arc again if you really fail miserably.

You open your eyes and look around. Your in a white room. You try searching your mind but its a blank slate. You remember nothing of your past. Not even your name. You look at a mirror that suddenly appears in front of you. As you observe yourself a small flashback of your life happens. So, who are you?

A: Jade Walker, A Blonde with shoulder length hair and jade green eyes along with a athletic build. You are taller then average for your age. Your parents own a popular company though its currently falling. Since they have the company they rarely visit. You have a annoying little sister named Ruby but you still love her. You take karate classes for self defence and almost a black belt. You are known world wide as the 'Jade Dragon'.

B: Darren. A black haired teenager of under average height for your age. You have baby blue eyes and grew up as a orphan with no last name as your house was burnt down by the mafia. You had to learn to defend yourself when you were young so despite your size you have amazing reflexes and agility. Your a successful thief and pickpocket. Not something to be proud of but hey, You need someway to make a living. In this cruel world only the strong survive. You learnt that the hard way and due to that you can be a bit..what's the word? heartless and cold.

C: Autumn Woods. A dark brown haired girl of medium height with forest brown eyes. Your nothing special except you have a above average IQ and are amazing at archery. Ever since you were 10 and had read the Rangers Apprentice series by John Flanagan you decided your path in life. You wished to become a archer, more specifically a Ranger. You begged your mother about it and eventually she succumbed with your fathers help. You started archery classes at the age of 11 and became a prodigy. Due to you intelligence You were able to calculate at what height or angle to aim for and shoot with uncanny accuracy. In fact you did this without realizing it! Its been 8 years since then and you have entered many competitions and won.

D: Xavier Fletchers. A redhead with bluish greenish eyes. You aren't exactly smart nor fast but you have remarkable stamina and strength. Your short tempered and often end up punching people who do so much as whisper behind your back, you participate in kids wrestling tournaments by the name of X. No you didn't get it from X-man.(or did you? actually its just his name is Xavier.) Despite your appearance, your kind at heart if not needing anger management. Your mother died in childbirth and your fathers a drunk not that he cares what you do, he barely gets out of the house these days.

F: Free will(create your own and post it, no Mary Sues please.)
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MysticMedievalSamuraiPrincess
I think your eyes turned back looking at your brain so you saw red, because your brain was bloody from the crash.
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The_Panda_Otaku
Hehehe....We shall see..so one votes for red?
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on March 03, 2015
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on March 03, 2015
The_Panda_Otaku
Well I might as well update this, gonna do a coin toss, heads is Autumn and Tails is Jade..
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The_Panda_Otaku
Tails wins! Will update soon..
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on November 25, 2014
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on November 25, 2014
The_Panda_Otaku
Ok guys this isn't like Illusion, You guys dont have your own little story with choices as I did in illusion, the story will progress depending on what the readers vote, so if one person wants Jade walker and other readers do too they can just thumbs up that comment in stead of reposting. Whichever choice has the most votes is the one that will happen.
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sapphirethehedgehog
Got it, thanks
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on November 07, 2014
JeweledOwl812
Ok thanks
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The_Panda_Otaku
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on November 07, 2014
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on November 07, 2014
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on November 07, 2014
JeweledOwl812
Autumn woods!!
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on November 06, 2014
sapphirethehedgehog
I'm jade walker (got to say this is a really good idea!)
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on November 06, 2014